Lost Red Spruce Pinecone

I saw you up ahead
By yourself
Off to the side

In the still brown winter grass

Scales tightly woven
At the tip
Releasing only halfway

The nearest pinetree
Over 100 metres away

A Squirrel surely brought
You this far and gave up

Now you will survive
Among my family
Of Lake Superior
Rocks and driftwood

Abandoned birdnests
And other found
Forest orphans

Forever

Loved


02/22/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lindley Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 6:09 PM
An amazing gem on the splendor and magnificence of Mother Nature... We that stride the planet in our exalted glory and arrogance still must yield to Mother Nature's power, majestic beauty and ability to survive despite our destructive tendencies. A7
Downing  Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Awe, I love it...hugs
Goff Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:32 AM
yes! saying goodbye to it as we speak to depart on my walkabout, thanks again, Akkina!
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Oh that is just gorgeous. A very enjoyable read, compassionately penned.
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Scott!
Manassian Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 1:43 AM
What sweet little piece. It's good though it was abandoned, it found a home with you. :) Hugs
Goff Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 7:28 AM
You're very sweet, Eileen, thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Dropping by to say hi and happy Easter.
Deo Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Is this the week of your daughter's wedding? May you find some great token - in word, deed, memento, or poetry material - when you return to PS. shalom Brother
Goff Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Hi Brother Anil....wedding last weekend this month....will be filled with God's Love as I celebrate with grateful joy!
Ball Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Oh I do love this. Being a nature lover this really spoke to me. Perhaps a seed from the pine cone will produce a lovely tree for future family members to enjoy and you can relate the story of where it came from. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 10:05 AM
You are very kind Judy, thank you!
La France Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 9:14 AM
James, this is lovely, it touched me spiritually, for all things in nature have a purpose, well done.
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Constance...yes, you understand my respect for all life...similar to feelings shared by our numerous Native Tribes in Minnesota & the Dakotas...a real shame injustice continues against Sovereign Tribes allowing Dakota Access Pipeline across Sacred Native Territory
Deo Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:51 PM
James, what a treat to read your Nature poem about a pine-cone, and the accompanying joy and comments from grateful readers. I am in awe (7! 7! 7!) shalom, shalom Dear Man of Nature and of Nature's God! amen
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thanks Anil!
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 6:42 PM
what a great personification, James. MUCH enjoyed. SEVEN
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 6:40 PM
thanks for explaining to me the reason behind "put the kibosh" on something. Let me see your poem now.
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Nature touches you, and then you gave it to us. Thanks.
Goff Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Exactly! Thanks Scott!
Vinson Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Right on, James - they last forever. : )
Goff Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thanks for stoppin' by Doug!
Nance Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Well described ;) Hope everything is okay, saw you were off of facebook. Hope to see you around again soon. Hugs.
Goff Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Thanks Casarah!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Reading this one again has the familiar feel of coming home. I am from Northern Ontario originally and this scene could easily be seen and felt.
Goff Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Richard, yes...the greatest joys are free!
Trifiatis Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 8:29 AM
I am touched by your poem because for some years I was a volunteer to protect the forests around Athens from fires so I found your poem so beautiful my friend, James!
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Thanks Demetrios! would dig walkabout Athens forests with you! identifying nature!
Flower Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 10:07 PM
You really have an eye for nature, James. Great thoughts! ;)
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 7:25 PM
You are very kind, Moon Flower! thank you!
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:31 AM
jimbo, i enjoyed your deep observation of nature...impressed!..huggs
Goff Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Thanks Nette!
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:34 PM
- A wonderful poem ... a beautiful picture with your words, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goff Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:27 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Melugin Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:38 AM
James, Your work is poetically proving that little things have a big story! 7 My best, chuck
Pinet Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Your love of nature and the simple things in life shines brightly throughout your poem. Emile.
Goff Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks Emile!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 11:37 PM
A fine example of personification. This is quite amazing and a joy to behold. A 7.
Goff Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Thanks Richard!
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