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Lost Path

The way was too long, Buy I'm afraid to look back, The scent of blood floated in Breeze, It slowly started to drizzle! The moon turned red, The bloomed flowers turned to bud- Oh! That was mysterious, The path started to disappear! Faraway white dress lady , With scariest look and blood shedding eyes, Made its way towards me, And there I lost sleep!

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Date: 10/11/2017 4:36:00 AM
What an incredibly vivid imagery you paint here for me. It's a beautiful poem, and I like it very much.
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Manu Ranjini
Date: 4/8/2018 1:19:00 AM
Thank you for your valuable comment , Darren

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