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Lost Love

Love is like an alarm clock
Just when you think all is set
she cheats and then wants to buzz 
Off goes the first ring  









For John Freemans competition Love or Humhour

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Debbie Guzzi

February 21, 2011 at 1:35 PM

LOL yes...true to form and I can picture/hear it put to music, if you'd like it could be entered in my contest too? We Aren't Japanese but please! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:52 PM

Cool one, Deirdre. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:24 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Deirdre, this is great fun, well done and congrats on your win. I read your piece on the Tramore Tales poetry book, it is wonderful. My Gr. Grandfather on the paternal side was an RIC man based in Queen Street. Small world eh!

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 11:02 AM

Hello Deidre, Congratulations on your wonderful win here. Very witty and so well done. As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:55 AM

great dodoitsu, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:43 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deirdre, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 4:48 AM

Hello Deirdre . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.i think that this was a very clever bit of writing, associating clock and ring.I'd 'wring' her alright.Eamon

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 8:56 PM

This is really very clever and rates high with me. Congratulations, Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2011 at 7:13 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's contest, Dierdre! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 5:53 PM

Congrats Deirdre on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu.. enjoyed every line as u enjoy your top ten victory and success with luv..