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Love is like an alarm clock Just when you think all is set she cheats and then wants to buzz Off goes the first ring For John Freemans competition Love or Humhour

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Date: 2/21/2011 1:35:00 PM
LOL yes...true to form and I can picture/hear it put to music, if you'd like it could be entered in my contest too? We Aren't Japanese but please! Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:52:00 PM
Cool one, Deirdre. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:59:00 PM
Deirdre, this is great fun, well done and congrats on your win. I read your piece on the Tramore Tales poetry book, it is wonderful. My Gr. Grandfather on the paternal side was an RIC man based in Queen Street. Small world eh!
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:02:00 AM
Hello Deidre, Congratulations on your wonderful win here. Very witty and so well done. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:55:00 AM
great dodoitsu, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Deirdre, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:48:00 AM
Hello Deirdre . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.i think that this was a very clever bit of writing, associating clock and ring.I'd 'wring' her alright.Eamon
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:56:00 PM
This is really very clever and rates high with me. Congratulations, Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's contest, Dierdre! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:53:00 PM
Congrats Deirdre on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu.. enjoyed every line as u enjoy your top ten victory and success with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:31:00 PM
Yep that the way it goes sometimes Eeirdre, Congratulations on your worthy poem's 4th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:16:00 PM
Very clever poem, Deirdre. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deirdre
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on being selected in the contest. This is a good one.
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:40:00 PM
Very cute poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:24:00 PM
Nice metaphor of alarm clock for life, Good luck in the contest, Deirdre
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:42:00 PM
Deirdre, thank you for supporting my contests, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:12:00 PM
Good one...Sad but has some humor also..Good luck in the contest..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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