Lost Love

LOST LOVE My love likes waves crashing against the rocksWrenching off all of my heart's tightened locks My blood mingles within the whiten foam washThis my last beat of my heart, lost in the swash I alive but now no longer connected to his loveLeft stranded with the soul of a mourning dove As true happiness lost, with the loss of my sonSo there is no recovery from what has become Reflections of what could have been, now deadDid you hate me so much reels within my head What rights did I have, such foolish thoughts, IThe grief we felt, when saying our last goodbye I've passed my own future and left it all behindI cannot depart this life now, as no longer blind Indiana Shaw . . . (-_-)

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/22/2022 7:54:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, oh i am speechless to read the loss of your son. He is with you in spirit watching over you. You need a hug. Hugs. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2022 11:12:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, it has been a few years! Remember that your son is with you in spirit. Yes I know that empty feeling. Now that I have a cat iti si not so bad. I am glad. xxx.Darlene

Indiana Shaw
Date: 5/22/2022 5:17:00 PM

Darlene, it has been a few years now, it's an emptiness that can never be filled, but, thank you for the hugs, appreciated x x x