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Lost Inside His Eyes

Lost inside his eyes

so close I breathe his essence

his gaze mirrors mine

Tracing his beautiful smile

I realize I am found

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Carole Duet

December 9, 2016 at 9:56 PM

So sweet and lovely, Andrea. Congrats! Carole

Francis J Grasso

November 17, 2016 at 8:29 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Congratulations. ...Fran

Joseph May

November 15, 2016 at 1:41 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea..

Janice Canerdy

November 15, 2016 at 1:39 PM

Lovely write, Andrea. Congrats on your top win! Janice

Curtis Johnson

November 15, 2016 at 11:48 AM

Congrats Andrea. This is one powerful little piece. It packs a punch. GBU.

Constance La France

November 15, 2016 at 9:47 AM

Andrea BEAUTIFUL and so deserving of First Place CONGRATULATIONS!

Sandra Haight

November 15, 2016 at 9:15 AM

I agree with Jo and Kim, Andrea...very breathtaking. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Joanna Daniel

November 15, 2016 at 6:29 AM

Oh, this is breathtaking, Andrea:) congratulations on your trophy win:)

Tamal Kundu

November 15, 2016 at 12:59 AM

Congratulation on the win Andrea. Absolutely beautiful!

White Wolf

November 14, 2016 at 10:22 PM

An awesome win, Andrea, well done

Kim Rodrigues

November 14, 2016 at 9:50 PM

Breathtaking...i find myself holding my breath as I take in your imagery! Congrats, Andrea!

Tom Arnone

April 23, 2016 at 12:55 PM

A short but riveting picture of devotion....

Abdullah Alhemaidy

April 6, 2016 at 6:14 AM

Sweet!

Vladislav Raven

March 24, 2016 at 9:33 PM

Hi Andrea, So simple and yet so well crafted. This is a beautiful piece of writing. This is Love Andrea, simple and gentle. Your words gently flow from the page and caress the heart. I am so glad i found this gem tonight my friend. This has to be a seven and it goes into my faves....MIKE.

Anand Parmale

March 5, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Feeling like to fall in love again N again after reading your poem....Very romantic

Jennifer Walker

February 11, 2016 at 8:25 AM

Wow you have a great sense of what love should be. Found, great word.

Duke Beaufort

February 8, 2016 at 6:33 AM

A beautiful expression of love. It is simply wonderful. Simplicity is the essence of beautiful architecture. A rare thing indeed.

Sizwe Hlabisa

February 8, 2016 at 2:24 AM

Congrats on yopur lovely work... :-)

Arthur Vaso

February 8, 2016 at 12:18 AM

My god this is so beautiful Andrea!!!! :) Hugs

Timothy Hicks

February 7, 2016 at 5:08 PM

Appreciation the lovely visits, Andrea! Always welcome :) You know, our minds are a funny thing. After reading my poem you might think I'd have a vendetta against all thinks TV, and yet in other poems I actually exalt old TV shows! I don't know how that works *shrugs* ... haha.