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Lost Inside His Eyes

Lost inside his eyes

so close I breathe his essence

his gaze mirrors mine

Tracing his beautiful smile

I realize I am found

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Carole Duet

Date: 12/9/2016 9:56:00 PM

So sweet and lovely, Andrea. Congrats! Carole

Francis J Grasso

Date: 11/17/2016 8:29:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea. Congratulations. ...Fran

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2016 1:41:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/15/2016 1:39:00 PM

Lovely write, Andrea. Congrats on your top win! Janice

Curtis Johnson

Date: 11/15/2016 11:48:00 AM

Congrats Andrea. This is one powerful little piece. It packs a punch. GBU.

Constance La France

Date: 11/15/2016 9:47:00 AM

Andrea BEAUTIFUL and so deserving of First Place CONGRATULATIONS!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/15/2016 9:15:00 AM

I agree with Jo and Kim, Andrea...very breathtaking. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/15/2016 6:29:00 AM

Oh, this is breathtaking, Andrea:) congratulations on your trophy win:)

Tamal Kundu

Date: 11/15/2016 12:59:00 AM

Congratulation on the win Andrea. Absolutely beautiful!

White Wolf

Date: 11/14/2016 10:22:00 PM

An awesome win, Andrea, well done

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2016 9:50:00 PM

Breathtaking...i find myself holding my breath as I take in your imagery! Congrats, Andrea!

Tom Arnone

Date: 4/23/2016 12:55:00 PM

A short but riveting picture of devotion....

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/6/2016 6:14:00 AM

Sweet!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/24/2016 9:33:00 PM

Hi Andrea, So simple and yet so well crafted. This is a beautiful piece of writing. This is Love Andrea, simple and gentle. Your words gently flow from the page and caress the heart. I am so glad i found this gem tonight my friend. This has to be a seven and it goes into my faves....MIKE.

Anand Parmale

Date: 3/5/2016 12:36:00 PM

Feeling like to fall in love again N again after reading your poem....Very romantic

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/11/2016 8:25:00 AM

Wow you have a great sense of what love should be. Found, great word.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/8/2016 6:33:00 AM

A beautiful expression of love. It is simply wonderful. Simplicity is the essence of beautiful architecture. A rare thing indeed.

Sizwe Hlabisa

Date: 2/8/2016 2:24:00 AM

Congrats on yopur lovely work... :-)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/8/2016 12:18:00 AM

My god this is so beautiful Andrea!!!! :) Hugs

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/7/2016 5:08:00 PM

Appreciation the lovely visits, Andrea! Always welcome :) You know, our minds are a funny thing. After reading my poem you might think I'd have a vendetta against all thinks TV, and yet in other poems I actually exalt old TV shows! I don't know how that works *shrugs* ... haha.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/7/2016 4:15:00 PM

From lost ... to found! Very subtly clever, Andrea. Romantic and sweet. In what way are you tracing that beautiful smile, I wonder ;)