Get Your Premium Membership

Lost in the Woods

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Krishnanand Guptar.


Writtten 6 August For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 4 Poetry Contest Poetry Contest of Mark Toney

Lost in the Woods Strolling in the midst of a dense forest With emerald green trees spanning the sky, Tasting the pristine beauty of the scene Somehow I found myself lost in the woods; I wearily waded my way in vain Across the tortuous serpentine lanes, Speckled all through with thick thorns and thickets, But each time fumbled at the starting point; Lost by misfortune in a select zone I felt like a stranger in a strange land, Like an intruder amidst giant trees Towering the tightened sphere with their shade; Knowing not the rightful course to pursue I stood still and tried to peer down myself For the inner light to dispense some hints Or the inner voice to whisper some words. But, most of the trees seemed to sneer at me, Some to snarl at me like wild woeful winds Treating the area as their enclave, A guarded territory of their own; A few of the lofty trees seemed to shine Like sapphire gems of sincere sympathy, Some with their heart, gilded in molten gold, Some with their mind, glowing like emerald; One massive tree seemed whisper near my ears: “Peer into the depth of your heart with love And the course of your path will shine therein Follow it and you`ll reach your journey`s goal;” Another gigantic tree seemed to hint: “Let go of the scoff and snickering sneers, Gaze down your inner self with tranquil mind, The inner light will blaze your path ahead.” I pursued the counsels of both huge trees: Both pointed in the self-same direction, The same course, at end of which emerged light Broadening my vision and my essence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/8/2025 4:18:00 AM
What a delightful poem! incredibly detailed, as though the wind were gently bringing each word to the reader's senses. The poem examines the issue of self-discovery and the path to enlightenment in the face of uncertainty and hardship. In a world that can feel overpowering and alienating, it represents the search for inner wisdom and direction.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things