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When pebbles knead the holes in my shoes These torn eyes writhe from my orphan blues, A lost soul quivering in the cold... I feel alone, a birth date untold No parents cupping my sullen face; While time grates in this runaway place. They say that I was darn negated, Like a package, somehow, quite hated Thrown quickly in an old garbage truck.. But why, why, did I run out of luck? Oh time, I no longer wish to mourn; To be nestled and family- born… Still, nights cut pain; my wishes decay In foster homes where I briefly stay. But rags comfort me,” kid, you’ll be fine, When adoption brings love’s true sunshine!” ------------------- Dated 11/6/2015 For the Contest, Trashed #4, Sponsor: Broken Wings Written by: nette onclaud

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Date: 12/8/2015 10:30:00 PM
What a great message and very well written. Congratulations on your top spot win. Well deserved.
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:45:00 PM
Heartbreaking yet beautifully written in your own unique style Nette...I can't imagine this not placing in a contest and I'm SO glad it got the top spot in this one...Merry Christmas!! - Tim
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations, SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:52:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:13:00 AM
Nette, you got me teary eyed.. touching and sad.. COngratulations!~Olive ELoisa =`)
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:18:00 AM
Very nice poem...Nette..Big congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:53:00 AM
This is so heart rending, Nette! Congrats on your first placement!
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:06:00 PM
Greetings nette.... Congratulations for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:45:00 PM
This my friend is truly wonderful poetry! A7 and a definite fav.
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Date: 11/7/2015 12:03:00 PM
I love this nette. Still a winner for me. 7 and fav!
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Date: 11/6/2015 5:16:00 PM
Oh, the hope in the hopeful ending! Very touching and moving ... CayCay
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Date: 11/6/2015 6:10:00 AM
Very moving work... enjoyed!!
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Date: 11/5/2015 3:52:00 PM
I agree with you my lovely friend. It's a valuable gem like poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/5/2015 3:15:00 PM
Oh Nette, I'm touched by this poem which highlights the plight of orphaned or unwanted children. It is love that they lack most...perhaps adoption could solve that, up to a certain point. #7 gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:49:00 PM
DOWNRIGHT EXCELLENT! I have a soft spot for children as i am a kid of my dad's 2nd family. this moved me to the point of staying on your page, pondering about so many children in this world without a family. Let me applaud you, Nette!
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:48:00 PM
Oh...this is such a touching piece, Nette. So sad.....How it must pain the heart of God to see his children unloved.
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:17:00 PM
Riveting piece nette. Wish I could just give them all a comforting hug. The pic welled me up.
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:42:00 PM
Emotions dancing with rag dolls tug at the coldest heart! So well written 7 My best, chuck
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