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Lost In the Cold

When pebbles knead the holes in my shoes
These torn eyes writhe from  my orphan blues,
A lost soul quivering in the cold...
I feel alone, a birth date untold
No parents cupping my sullen face;
While time grates in this runaway place.

They say that I was darn negated,
Like a package, somehow, quite hated
Thrown quickly in an old garbage truck..
But why, why, did I run out of luck?

Oh time, I no longer wish to  mourn;
To be nestled and family- born…
Still, nights cut pain; my wishes decay
In foster homes where I briefly stay.

But rags comfort me,” kid, you’ll be fine,
When adoption brings love’s true sunshine!”



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Dated 11/6/2015
For the Contest, Trashed  #4, 
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Written by: nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 10:30 PM
What a great message and very well written. Congratulations on your top spot win. Well deserved.
Ryerson Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Heartbreaking yet beautifully written in your own unique style Nette...I can't imagine this not placing in a contest and I'm SO glad it got the top spot in this one...Merry Christmas!! - Tim
A  Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations, SKAT
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Nette, you got me teary eyed.. touching and sad.. COngratulations!~Olive ELoisa =`)
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:18 AM
Very nice poem...Nette..Big congrats on your win.
Cheema Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 3:53 AM
This is so heart rending, Nette! Congrats on your first placement!
Kimathi Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Greetings nette.... Congratulations for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
Lindley Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 7:45 PM
This my friend is truly wonderful poetry! A7 and a definite fav.
Nunez Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 12:03 PM
I love this nette. Still a winner for me. 7 and fav!
Godwin Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Oh, the hope in the hopeful ending! Very touching and moving ... CayCay
O'Leary Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 6:10 AM
Very moving work... enjoyed!!
Devnath  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 3:52 PM
I agree with you my lovely friend. It's a valuable gem like poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Oh Nette, I'm touched by this poem which highlights the plight of orphaned or unwanted children. It is love that they lack most...perhaps adoption could solve that, up to a certain point. #7 gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
Conte Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:49 PM
DOWNRIGHT EXCELLENT! I have a soft spot for children as i am a kid of my dad's 2nd family. this moved me to the point of staying on your page, pondering about so many children in this world without a family. Let me applaud you, Nette!
Manassian Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Oh...this is such a touching piece, Nette. So sad.....How it must pain the heart of God to see his children unloved.
Smith Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Riveting piece nette. Wish I could just give them all a comforting hug. The pic welled me up.
Melugin Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Emotions dancing with rag dolls tug at the coldest heart! So well written 7 My best, chuck
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