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Lost In Sorrow a Sad Christmas

Winter takes in its arms weeping stars as dawn draws in. The sky turned from black to a steel gray; snow rest upon the roof tops and yards revealing the ingrain coverlet beauty. I walk the halls naked in the depth of despair and death; deep darkness devours until hollow. My mind spins to inner depth, lost in sorrow. I pine and die inside. Looking for comfort, but you're not around. With winter outside my heart weeps like a child. Where have you gone? Demented baneful hurt, come out of your tomb be gone for all eternity. Once your hands touched my face and with your eyes you said I do, that Christmas day. Now just a fading memory. Your light grows dim and I've inherited the pain. 12/11/2018 Poetry Contest : 'A Sad Christmas' - December 2018 Writing Challenge - Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 12/17/2018 2:51:00 AM
- Many factors can make Christmas an extra heavy time - Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 7:53:00 PM
This is so beautifully written Eve! I see why it received fop honors! I agree! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/16/2018 5:39:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, so emotional and full of love, well done ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/16/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Dear Heart... Hugs
Date: 12/14/2018 8:34:00 PM
Yeah, this one hits hard. Profoundly sad. Warm hugs to you, Eve:-) Well done!
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Date: 12/14/2018 5:49:00 AM
Devastating story, exceptional poetry dearest friend, Eve!
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Date: 12/13/2018 10:37:00 PM
I just wanted you to know I read this more than once, such touching poetry, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/13/2018 11:07:00 PM
You know what I'm going through and it touches me.. I do try to keep bust so my body won't tremble. 107 days
Date: 12/13/2018 8:12:00 PM
amazing work, Eve. one of the best I have read here tonight.
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:49:00 PM
This piece is truly heart-wrenching, Eve! Janice
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:45:00 PM
I feel the sadness through the ink of your pen dear, Eve. I know it's a tough time ...stay strong.. hugs // Charlie
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Date: 12/13/2018 11:39:00 AM
A heartfelt expression of sadness and loss..best wishes
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Date: 12/12/2018 8:09:00 PM
Your poem's authenticity blows me away, Eve. This is raw at raw's best, the emotion is hard hitting and easy to relate to (unfortunately.) I think a piece of you went into this write, a tear and bit of heart blood, making it profoundly touching. I have no doubt you penned a winner with this excellent poem! Oh, my. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/12/2018 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay, it hurts , but I see more than me are worse.. The days are getting close to our anniversary and I really feel it...
Date: 12/12/2018 3:42:00 PM
Your words are so heart felt all the more knowing that you are experiencing these emotions so raw and fresh. My prayer that is somehow how he can reach your spirit from heaven and bring you some substance of comfort through the season, Love and hugs xo
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/12/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thank you my friend. talking with you everyday helps ... Hugs
Date: 12/12/2018 8:08:00 AM
You captured it well...something you must feel...who knows why... only time will tell...tears of joy rain in your heart...How lovely it was... to experience his love....Merry Christmas from above...
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/12/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo... Hugs
Date: 12/12/2018 4:38:00 AM
Deeply touching ... Reverberation of love blending in sadness ... Probir. By the way, what about Victor? ...I have been irregular here for personal reasons. For several days I tried several times to read his latest poems. But no page of his I can find here ... Can you shed any light ...
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:17:00 AM
Wish I was there to bring you even a small small small wee smile!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/12/2018 12:31:00 AM
Thank you... would love it... Yes, Christmas is our anniversary and his been gone 105 days....

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