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With thanks to those who encouraged me in my accident.  I appreciated their support.

Lost in Hospital

Weird, lost in suburbia of grey concrete. How did I come here in this tragic desolation? I just lie down, face up. I cannot get up. This is no place for me. What need have I of this place? Where is this place? Despair.....futility....distress…. No one in sight. No taxis, trams, vehicles, closed shops, or signs of life. Just where exactly am I? Can I retrace my steps? Like an opened tomb with the smell of stench, It pervades everywhere as rubbish litters the streets. There is no illumination at the end of the tunnel. Am I dreaming? I pinch myself. No, I'm awake A door opens; paramedics lift me up. An ambulance takes good care for me. Slowly I gain my strength.
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Kauffman Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 11:53 AM
Victor, like Andrea, I came upon this "by accident!" Sorry for the pun. I pray that you continue to recover. Know that I will keep you in prayer. Your poem is written so well with amazing images that illustrate your dreadful experience! Be blessed as you heal. Thank you for letting us know about your accident so we can pray for you.
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 11:52 AM
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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:21 PM
Dear Victor. I came upon this by chance. What happened? Oh, I hope it wasn't too terrible an accident. I am glad you still used your poetic voice to describe so vividly your feelings of helplessness and distress. I hope you are now regaining most of your strength. Please keep us posted and thank you for this post.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 12:54 PM
Hello Victor, I just found out. I hope you recover very soon my friend. You are in my prayers. My friend get well soon. Your friend /Darlene
Buhagiar Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Thank you. I'm afraid it is going to take some time for me to recover. Your prayers are appriecated. Victor
Cunningham Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:43 PM
Just seen this Victor. Wishing you a speedy recovery. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:25 PM
- Caught in despair ... but, fortunately you are in caring hands, Victor - (sorry for the late comment ... been on vacation) - Praying for a speedy recovery :) - hugs
Bayles Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 7:23 AM
There is a lot of emotion in this poem, Victor. A good portrayal of a sense of confusion.
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:23 PM
Oh Victor, I just got back to town and this is the first I've had a chance to be back on here, I am so terribly sorry you were hurt, are you recovering now? I will keep you in my prayers!
Kitchin Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 3:42 AM
Victor, So sorry to hear. I did not know you had an accident. I hope you're on the mend and home soon. A powerful poem, a great depiction of being in the hospital. Please let us know how you're doing. -hugs
One Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:33 PM
sorry to hear you had an accident.. I hope you are better now and recovering.... As always you expressed it perfectly in a poem..
DiMino Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Being in a helpless state, is no fond place to be in. My prayers are with you, my friend. Hoping you are feeling better. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 4:09 AM
Oh no, I am so sad to read this, I hope you are doing fine dear Victor. I feel this poem so deeply ~ and can empathize Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 1:06 PM
I am so glad you are recovering, what a great poem to write your experience, I like the suspense of the traffic, etc... great work!!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 11:34 AM
What a powerful write. I wish you only the very best. Glad you are home/OK....... Have a blessed day writing away................
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 9:56 AM
Oh, my... 😢I’ve been in your situation, but luckily it happened in my own yard. I blame it on my age. Wishing you a speedy recovery—my thoughts and prayers are with you.
Rodgers Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 8:09 AM
Dear Victor, this is a deeply moving look at the disorienting threshold between trauma and recovery. I pray for your full recovery! When that door opens and help arrives, the darkness begins to yield. It’s a powerful testament to human vulnerability, the gift of compassionate care, and the miraculous way the body and spirit begin to gather their strength again. I’m glad you are on the mend, and thank you for sharing such a personal, triumphantly honest piece of your journey. Blessings, Daniel
Poet Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:27 AM
Happy to see you back on PS, Victor. And I hope you're back to your normal life after the accident. Your poem captures the feeling of being lost and isolated with vivid imagery, evoking a strong sense of confusion and despair. The progression from feeling trapped to being rescued provides a hopeful end.
Godwin Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:06 AM
This hit me in the gut & heart. A great job in writing & delivering a piece that put me with you, inside your experience. I don't know what happened, only 'an accident'. Are you home, were you pronounced 'better', do you feel better? I was relieved to see you on one of my poems, I gave thanks to God for being with you and all hospital staff in their care of you. Such experiences are hard to sum up and deliver as well as your talented pen did. No more accidents, k? HUGS ... CayCay
George Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:18 AM
So sorry to hear of your accident. I felt your absence recently . Hope by now you are OK. It must have been a bewildering experience for you. Was it a black out or an accidental fall? However glad you got timely help. You could effectively present the delirious experience. Take care, dear Victor. 🤔
Anaya Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 11:11 PM
Quite an unexpected and devastating experience you have expressed, so good to see you back to tell us in your wonderful voice, Victor , stay well, dear poet. Blessings
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 10:59 PM
Dear Victor, I hope you are recovering well from your accident. Thank goodness for the paramedics. Thinking of you… Beryl
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 9:26 PM
Victor, this conveys the bewilderment and vulnerability of sudden illness with striking immediacy. The clipped opening and questioning lines place us inside the speaker’s disorientation, while the bleak urban imagery makes that lost feeling vivid and tangible. The arrival of the paramedics provides a quietly reassuring turn, and the closing recovery offers a gentle note of gratitude and hope. Good to hear from you. Keep getting better we miss you.
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:52 PM
Dear Victor, thank God the paramedics arrived when they did! I am so glad that your strength is returning, too! I pray that you are fully recovered soon, and I can read more of your beautiful poetry.🙏❤️🌹
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