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A cryptic note: “Meet me in the middle of Nowhere, Tonight when the moon is full.” What is my wife playing at? Is this her idea of a honeymoon? Below is a picture of a garden, With a large maze in it. Nothing to do but obey. The moon has barely risen. I see a sign: The Opening to Nowhere Why do I tremble? I go in and soon get lost In the sinuous paths. It is a worse puzzle in the night. Twisting, turning back Only to find a wall of thick foliage. I am trapped but will not give up. Suddenly I notice A small opening in the foliage. So I cheat and find myself in the middle of the circuit. In the middle is a sun dial, A torch and a note: “What are you waiting for? I’m in bed waiting.” The problem is how to get out. Too complicated. The moon shines on me By the time I find my way out I’ll be dead tired, Sleeping in my bed.

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