Lost Ground

Somewhere in the general melee
we lost our imaginary horses,
                                  their ghostly neighing
added pathos to this momentous moment.

It was decided, we boys, and one sister
of a boy we hardly knew,
that Custer must die, the Indians win,
there could be no sudden victories
              plucked from certain disaster.

We had no Indians,
one bow with a rubber-tipped arrow
does not make a gathering of the tribes.
We had no Custer,
six dark haired kids, no long flowing hair,
no mustaches.                        Undaunted
we marched on to meet our heroic death,
lip-bugles tooting, makeshift flags flying.

A fertile field of battle was selected.

At the site of our coming glory,
it was disheartening to discover,
a growling construction site,
giant bull dozers,
tractors, and iron-toothed diggers
busily tearing up
our hallowed ground.

Jim (my best pal),
loudly proclaimed: " fork it,"
to no one in particular,
then sloped away,
                  hands in pockets -

an event which I now consider sadly ironic,
for ever since,
we have lost all sorts of battles
                                  over many a fertile field.
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Gomez Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:46 AM
there is an unmistakable nostalgia within the broken lines of this poem
Ashford Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Miguel, yes, it is a fragment of my youth, glad it worked for you. Best E
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