Get Your Premium Membership

Who Would Have Guessed

Listen to poem:
you were a lady’s man a shameless flirt a game player it was ironic how you fell for that free spirit who somehow unbeknownst to her turned you into a little puppy following her around till you couldn’t stand to be away losing your freedom giving it up freely the two little words 'I do' finally sealing the deal now here we are blissfully married for ten years and now through chaos as it swirls… it’s us against the world AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 23, 2019 for contest FREEDOM TO NOTHING TO SOMETHING sponsored by DELILAH VENTURA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/26/2019 10:39:00 AM
Sometimes it happens; big bad turns into little mesmerized, emotional captive. Amazing...well done. Wish you well in the contest.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2019 10:25:00 AM
Ah, we rarely see this, but when we do, we are almost always amazed. Beautiful write, Line. Bravo!
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. My husband recognized himself right away.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things