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Lost? Found?

All up in a cloud Foggy, cold, and dark Everything so silent It's piercingly quite loud. I'm lost and lonely No one to pick me up No one to kick me down. I'm flat on my face But yet I'm spinning 'round. My night is day, my day is night I have something inside me. To find a way out of this this... I might. But what if all this is really meant to be? I try to scream And wake-up But I don't think any of this is a dream. Suddenlt my heart starts to pulse My eyes open wide As you walk into my sight and brighten up my life. This feeling is so new it feels false. I want to run and hide But this feeling is so wonderful. Not sure if this is cloud nine Or even seventh heaven, But everything I'm sure is going to be fine Everything is so loud, I'll never miss the silence. Clear, warm, and bright All up in a cloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/8/2008 10:13:00 PM
Very descriptive and nicely done. Continue to share.
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