Lost? Found?

All up in a cloud
Foggy, cold, and dark
Everything so silent
It's piercingly quite loud.
I'm lost and lonely
No one to pick me up
No one to kick me down.
I'm flat on my face
But yet I'm spinning 'round.
My night is day, my day is night
I have something inside me.
To find a way out of this this...
I might.
But what if all this is really meant to be?
I try to scream
And wake-up
But I don't think any of this is a dream.
Suddenlt my heart starts to pulse
My eyes open wide
As you walk into my sight and brighten up my life.
This feeling is so new it feels false.
I want to run and hide
But this feeling is so wonderful.
Not sure if this is cloud nine
Or even seventh heaven,
But everything I'm sure is going to be fine
Everything is so loud, I'll never miss the silence.
Clear, warm, and bright
All up in a cloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 8, 2008 at 10:13 PM
Very descriptive and nicely done. Continue to share.
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