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#18 on Best New Poem's List, May 16, 2025
Used Nov. 11, 2025 for Joseph May's "A Poem Based on a Song, Old or New
Lost Forlornly in Space
I am but one person.
On a mission I had gone.
I'm now locked out of safety
of the spaceship I was on.
Black ink is spilled around me,
vast and never-ending
as into nothingness
I find my body wending.
The oxygen inside my tank
will last perhaps six hours.
I can see stars - stabs of light;
they are cosmic flowers!
Forlornness embraces me -
a suffocating feeling
so unlike my loved ones’ hugs.
With gloom my brain is reeling.
I travel in my mind
to things I cherish most -
my family and friends.
To them I’ll be a ghost.
A ghost forever floating
in this upside-down endless sea
which will be a graveyard
of black surrounding me.
God, I am imploring you
as I drift and drift and drift,
may I soon be in your light -
my death both peaceful and swift.
Based on Iron Maiden's "The Final Frontier"
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