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Lost At Sea

The wretched sea brought you back to me, for you surface me like pebbles along the shore. You made me see pure beauty no other can see, and my love, I could never ask for any more. For you are the man I shall always adore, reaching and searching for our true destiny. You rescued me when I was lost at sea- Oh, the wretched sea brought you back to me. March 12, 2018

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Date: 3/13/2019 12:34:00 PM
Oh that wretched sea - love these words - definitely the sea is perilous , but it brought back your man that you will always adore! Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write Lu Loo. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/13/2019 9:30:00 AM
Beautifully and emotionally felt luloo. Congratulations on your deserving high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/12/2019 2:40:00 PM
so moved by the grace of your piece on love, lou... thanks for appreciating mine... huggs
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Date: 3/12/2019 1:13:00 PM
Ah Love, well done LuLoo...
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