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Labyrinth paths, winding and twisting, a serpentine meandering, otherworldly, ethereal, much too dreamy, lost and wandering; saturnine, long raven sparkling hair that I hide behind, woefully, tangled in the branches and thorns of life, lost hopelessly. And then I found poetry and I pen my sorrow in verses bleeding, now I swirl with beautiful words and send them in the universe, soaring; writing my sadness is intoxicating, but also it can be a dreadful curse hurting, prisoner of the past, locked in chains, can I begin to reverse, be a new me changing. Entwined in words that I put away, I found them still waiting, with a painful heart, I write my tangled, thorny journey, my hand trembling; unraveling the weave of chaotic corridors in my life, I fall to my knees, praying, oh will others love my verses penned, will they weep sadly when I write the aching? In the shady silent forest, a shimmering snake seeks it's sanctuary, slithering, beautiful definitely, and like the iridescent snake, I hide lost intentionally; hidden, safe, melancholy, until the sun has found my soul delicately, labyrinth paths, winding and twisting, a serpentine meandering; ___________________________ February 3, 2016 Acrostic/Mono Rhyme/Alliteration/Internal Rhyme Copyright Protected, ID 16-751-710-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Theme chosen, Lost and Found Written for the contest, 4 x 4 Pairing, Master Rhyme, sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 3/30/2016 12:31:00 PM
Hi Constance, a beautiful write my friend. As always, your lines just flow across the page so gently. A deep write with deep emotions singing from the page. Excellence in every line. I always Love to read your heart's words, your dreams of poetic colour. This is an excellent write as i would have expected. There is always a beauty in your words Constance. This wonder is a seven and it goes into my faves. Always an honour to read your words. Hugs....Mike.
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Date: 3/30/2016 3:26:00 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting my poem with the lovely comment, the fav and 7!
Date: 2/13/2016 5:10:00 PM
Yes, yes to loving your verses and pen. I loved this ... CayCay
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:13:00 PM
CayCay, thanks for visiting and the love !!!
Date: 2/13/2016 2:43:00 AM
Hi BW. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:13:00 PM
Teddy, thanks for visiting and for the congrats, so grateful !
Date: 2/13/2016 1:21:00 AM
Any time
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Wow, I felt like you were writing about me. I totally feel you on that. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:59:00 AM
Scott, thanks for the congratulations, and the wow, I think many poets share the same soul ~
Date: 2/12/2016 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Awesome.
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:59:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome !
Date: 2/11/2016 10:35:00 PM
BROKEN, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:00:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and your forever support ~
Date: 2/11/2016 9:19:00 PM
Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Broken.
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:21:00 PM
Upma, thanks for the congrats, the lovely and the awesome !
Date: 2/11/2016 6:49:00 PM
Beautiful, flowing and evocative write, BW. Congrats on your awesome win! Kim
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:17:00 PM
Kim, thanks for that lovely comment and the congrats and awesome !
Date: 2/11/2016 5:15:00 PM
Hi BW: I love the way you traverse through articulate wordage as a path to untangle your hair to write as a brook flows continuously. Your poetry encourages! Felicidades on your win!
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:18:00 PM
Ralph, thank you for that beautiful comment, so appreciated !
Date: 2/11/2016 4:33:00 PM
I dont know if I have a gremlin again as i commented on this yesterday Broken Wings - a deep beautiful poem congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:19:00 PM
Jan, that's so weird, but thanks for the beautiful, the congrats and the hugs !
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:19:00 PM
Nicola, thanks for the beautiful the fave and the congratulations, so appreciated !
Date: 2/4/2016 7:50:00 PM
Love your craftsman ship here with those serpentine paths!
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Date: 2/5/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thomas, thanks for visiting, yes the serpentine paths and the irridescent slithering snake really inspired me in this one ~
Date: 2/4/2016 9:15:00 AM
I found what you lost and lost what you found....together our words will surely astound....poetic musings which lift us up from the ground....its the song of the heart, who wouldn't Love that sound....Beautiful write bw....;)
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:34:00 PM
Eric, thanks for the always poetic comment, love it and thanks for the beautiful too !!!
Date: 2/3/2016 7:45:00 PM
Nice! Very haunting and evocative.. lots of great words that immerse the reader in a strange realm: otherworldly, labyrinth, serpentine, saturnine, ehtereal, meandering, iridescent
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:31:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment, oh yes, I opened my box of words for this one !
Date: 2/3/2016 6:36:00 PM
Remember that the ones you have lost are looking upon you and are with you, and they want you to soar.
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:32:00 PM
Duke, thank you so much, and I will soar no matter how many try to keep me down, I will soar on these broken wings ~~
Date: 2/3/2016 6:34:00 PM
Yes, the lines are a pleasure to read. Absolutely amazing emotion. You are so real. I almost expect you to come out of the screen and plop down right here. Expressive almost too much are you. What a strange thing language is, and you have mastered it with a sad pen. It is not words that speak to us, but rather you. How is it that there can be poetry which speaks so individually to me? I am just in a trance. So, I hope you do not mind the praise. I think deserve it you do!
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:35:00 PM
Duke, you honor me with your words of praise, that is what I want you to feel, like I am talking to you, if I had magic I would come to hold your hand and take you on a magical journey into my poetry ~~
Date: 2/3/2016 4:28:00 PM
you've done this with such excellence, great write there BW...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:37:00 PM
Sage, I found it a difficult challenge, like putting a puzzle together, but I stuck with it and this is the result, thanks for the excellent and the encouragement, appreciate ~
Date: 2/3/2016 1:11:00 PM
Your word choices elegantly define what you wish to capture and convey to the reader, feelings flowing freely though out your poem. Emile.
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Date: 2/3/2016 1:46:00 PM
Emile, thanks for visiting and for that lovely comment, I am so grateful ~
Date: 2/3/2016 10:53:00 AM
lovely use of words, so well put together. a real joy to read. read your bio, great to meet lover of classical music too, I echo your thoughts not feeling part of this world, truly understand too. blessings, Gordon
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:40:00 PM
Yes, I do go to concerts, in my city we have sunday afternoon concerts that are not expensive and I often go, but I must admit the last one, was so relaxing that I almost fell asleep . . . okay I did fall asleep
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:29:00 PM
My pleasure Constance, I sometimes listen when I am writing, do you ever get to any concerts? , I get to a few as like Edinburgh festival. Have nice day, Gordon
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
Gordon, thank you for visiting and for the lovely comment, so appreciated, oh yes love classical music, I usually listen to it just before writing ~
Date: 2/3/2016 10:26:00 AM
wonderful flow of lines woven as one thought..how beautiful, constance..later.. huggs
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:59:00 AM
nette, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful and beautiful .... hugs back at you . . .
Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 AM
A dreamy, ethereal and image filled write, BW. The journey through your labyrinth is long and slow and filled with beautiful poetry. I wish you luck in finding your way through.
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:00:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting with that lovely comment, appreciate ~

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