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Water on the ground At a continuous flow Having no where to go Breaking out From a girl so lost A girl despised A girl who suffered More than most She loses hope In those who care In everything Even prayer She lacks the strength To go outside She’s filled with lies With a heart defied She believes she meant to hurt She believe she’s meant to die She starts to believe All of those lies No where to turn Oh how she thought She was blinded by the fear Of reaching out She cut she cut Till she bled Till at last that one fateful day She cut ties with the world And went away All who mourned her lost Never realizing the pain within Of a poor lost girl Thinking she was sin Dedicated: to my friend who lost sense in the world. She couldn't handle all the pain. i know shes in a better place. But i miss her. this is just how she saw the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/13/2015 2:59:00 PM
I wonderfully written poem. I love how sharp it is. 1st line of 5th verse, 'she's' not she, I think? I truly found this to be a compelling, dramatic poem ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/13/2015 3:02:00 PM
I just saw your sad dedication. Your friend and her death will probably sit with you all your life, diminish, but never leave. I hope it serves to grow your own positive understanding ... CayCay
Date: 9/4/2015 7:02:00 PM
This is deep Bridgette, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:22:00 PM
Bridgette, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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