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You've been lost along the equinox of confusion's bitter myriad And then you smile, but with a trace of roses, pressed, between a page We take a walk, beneath the limbs, in filtered light, against the sun It slips away, to welcome night but sparks a light within your eyes. A star appears, and alters time. You suddenly become alive, with stories I had never heard And even birds high on the branch, will stretch to hear what you might share With quavered voice, but strangely clear, a remnant of another year, awakens from a buried box, you turn a key, and now unlock We walk the grove and as you spoke a thousand words, once thought as lost are ghosts, like shadows, under oaks The leaves fall down and turn to ash I take your hand, to gently hold into my own, as I am told about a child, in summer. born then lost upon that autumn's door I cry for you, ...your tears are dry The comfort of the warmth of hands unite us now beneath a sky that's turning dark, across the land I watch this girl now disappear back into fog, she was before The memory will drift away Perhaps it's best to let it stay We pass again, back through the gate one moment left to hesitate A change of view, each step we take Tonight is fraught of sadness, great ------------------------------------------------------- By Carrie Richards 10/15/14 Iambic Tetrameter For Giorgio's Contest: Top Gun/Structured Form

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Date: 11/8/2014 5:39:00 AM
Wonderful write, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 11/6/2014 8:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 10/17/2014 11:21:00 AM
This is a wonderful form for stories of emotion. I enjoyed the read, Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/15/2014 9:28:00 PM
Beautiful story, Carrie, layered in sweet iambs, full of richness and love, very much you, jimbo
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
Such a heart warming beautiful poem Carrie. I am no expert but to me this is perfect in every way. GL. Fav. 7
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