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How can we guide our children right When no goals end is in our sight As our faults they show on the final mile Have we turned our backs on Heavens smile Which way is up which way is down A bubble in a bottle a tear-stained clown A cork in the ocean as we stray too far Nearing journeys end with no guiding star Each time you leap for to scale that wall And the Devil smiles just to see you fall What good a parent who has lost his way A flockless sheep a wayward stray Your fall from grace was a rapid one Like a crippled crow who's race is run Never walked the line on the straight and narrow Trading chains of hope for chains of sorrow Indelible truths on a soul you've stained Does the lead you've lost beat the lead you've gained Will a veil of tears cement your fate While a rotting corpse lies in mournful state We wait to hear His words be spoken Our faith we bear our only token For a way to clear a path to open As nails to rust our crosses broken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/19/2014 10:46:00 PM
Wow.....All I can say really. Very Deep Peter. Love this.
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Peter Walsh
Date: 1/20/2014 4:44:00 PM
Landon old pal thanks for the thumbs up...you write with passion and that's the best way for me ....keep up the good work fella ...pete
Date: 1/19/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thanks Linda...I meant the very last line "as nails to rust, our crosses broken" to be a little glint of hopefulness again ....thanks for taking the time to comment..x
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Date: 1/3/2014 10:39:00 AM
Peter this is very deep. The ending imagery is morbid, I don't know how it feels to be complete. I don't like knowing one is always smiling and waiting for us to fall. But, that is the truth. We need to keep seeking and believing.... Your poem is awesomely rhymed out... LINDA
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