Lost

(31/08/2011) My shattered thoughts Crawling helplessly from my painful mind, Roaming separately in the misty night This act, I cannot control My shaken body, Sweating unexpectedly on my bed, Bleeding feelings as I was tortured inside This one, I cannot handle Got lost in my own mind Have I woken up? Or have I ever left real life? Adventuring dream or breathing reality, Which one does suit me?

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/18/2011 11:55:00 PM

burning questions Dinda.. interesting piece luv.. very powerful words ...thankxx for your anniversary greetings ..appreciate luv..

Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/19/2011 11:13:00 AM

You're welcome Linda. I really like your sweet and deep poems.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2011 11:30:00 PM

Good evening D.M., how are you? Deep thoughts. I been down this road. Where i am lost in my own ~ not knowing my whereabouts . Silly me... my own mind can take me to places that don't suit reality as well.. you did well here expressing lost feelings..take care,..p.d.

Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/19/2011 11:15:00 AM

I'm good P.D. and wish you well, too. I enjoyed your collaboration poems lately. Thanks for sharing them. Take care.. hugs - dinda