Notes About The Poem

Sponsor: Craig Cornish, Lost Contest, 6/27/2025

Lost

A child with eyes like stars, so far
away, she wonders, loud.
She fears, ‘How can she be.’ Afar
her thoughts, they’re deep; a shroud.
Buries her head in mother’s lap.

Her mother dreams in this vein.
She reveals to a woman, she’s lost.
Can’t find her way home. Mysterious.
In the fog of sleep and disturbance,
even now she knows not her child’s fear.

The child’s head hurts with thoughts, distraught.
Her inner mind held tight.
‘How can I be; how can I not?’
Angels give off their light -
her guardians of peace and calm.

This question spoken like a prayer
to God, who she has not grasped.
She reaches for the tangible touch
of her mother’s arms, sans discernment,
whilst the light-bearers smile and cheer.

Questions linger but faith takes hold.
She’s saved; arms raised, knees bent.
A lifetime quest - this child is old.
God does exist. He sent
enough answers to save the lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cunningham  Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 2:21 PM
I like this however, I personally feel envy at first due to broken roots. Personally... So, I wrote something that might explain. Called the creature. Love the angst that you write about, that mothers should feel at times. 3 star and a question mark...
Poteet Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 10:23 AM
Your message is so tender landing hard on the heart of this former teacher of youngsters, children of parents so "lost" in their world view. Conferences were a difficult challenge to make suggestions on their child's progress. Check your soup mail for words of hope.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, Reason!
Baker Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Very creative message you share in this finely written contest entry. Good luck in the contest, Kim. Write On! Your poetry is meaningful and helpful to many, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Bill! Much appreciated!
Mckeithan Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 12:10 AM
Powerful Kim. It took her some time but she found God. Good one for the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Fowler Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Very moving poem Kim. Your faith shines. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Proxenos Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Brilliant poetry Kim, I Love your faith and how somehow or other you bring God into the equation - this poem is almost mystical and definitely has a warm thread throughout for the child, that being both the mother and God, one untangible, one tangible but the girl is saved, through her reaching out with her faith to the untangible, God. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, dear Jennifer! I appreciate your comment!
Hind Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 9:16 AM
This is a powerful and moving poem, dear Kim. I have no real words to describe it. Wow. You surely bleed with this. I love where this leads - to God. I am so happy you rest in His arms.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 8:42 PM
Thank you and for the fave to!
Hind Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 9:16 AM
A FAV-
Crandall Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Neither here nor there, but I just had a thought - Mother and God must be the two greatest sources of comfort.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 8:42 PM
Very nice thought, David!
Crandall Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:44 PM
I feel for this child, now old, and glad she is no longer lost and fearful. It's not a good state for any child, whatever age!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 8:42 PM
I agree! Thank you, David!
Sharma  Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:17 AM
"He sent enough answers to save the lost" That is really soul stirring and evocative dear Kim! Love how you've written this poem in a deeply profound manner, reflecting the storms swirling in the child's mind and how fragile her heart can become with those overwhelming thoughts that sometimes seem to question the very essence of life. Angels do guard the souls of the children, as they are pure and serene and also, we ourselves are forever shielded by the inner light within, as the inner child never dies. Brilliantly done for the contest, sending you many best wishes and light always ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 7:56 AM
I so appreciate your comment! May God bless you, sweet Hiya! <3
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace