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Lossing Ground An Abc Style Poem

after being constantly degraded elmer fudd getting hot inside just kept lossing more navigable opportunities per quarter relying solely trustingly upon volunteers while xeroxing Yan'kee zeal (does this remind anybody of the current "Debt Crisses")

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/21/2011 3:42:00 AM

Hey John....Elmer Fudd could probably balance the Federal budget in an hour...This is a very strong ABC poem. This is what they are really supposed to look like. I wrote one for Moses' contest but had no idea it was really an ABC SENTENCE! Call it what it is and I could have figured it out. ;) A very happy Christmas week, John. Let's hang out and write together in the New Year...on here! lol. Gwendolen

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/20/2011 5:14:00 PM

Finally, I have seen an ABC poem written correctly. Just get rid of one of the "s" letters in "lossing", and everything couldn't be better with this impressive entry.

Cory Long

Date: 12/18/2011 7:02:00 PM

this was nicely penned thanks for stopping by and leaving your warm comments. have a merry christmas cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2011 12:36:00 AM

Good ABCing, john. And no I am no southern Gal, but I enjoy reading about the customs of the south for what they eat for holidays!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/11/2011 5:35:00 AM

I like the use of Elmer Fudd..Cute..Yes, you should have been with us to help us sing "Walking In A Winter Wonderland"..It was a very spiritual moment or moments..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/9/2011 4:45:00 AM

Very good x

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/5/2011 6:13:00 PM

Yes, the reminder is loud and clear and truly Elmer Fudd would probably be ashamed! Great write John! :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/5/2011 9:06:00 AM

Nice to see you trying a new form John. One I have not tried myself. No, I do not watch scary movies for don't want nightmares. ha ha. love phyl