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Loss of Innocence

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What should we do if we are ethically lazy? A blind leads a blind; all are crazy.  Our hearts shrank despite our wisdom.  My soul slipped from love to schism. Who are the enigmas in our own reflection? A chilly heart prevents affection.  Why is it so stark as Gothic inner strife?  while a few are weird and odd in daily life.   We're puzzled, determined, and upset.  It implies those who have been beset.  We don't recognize the culture or people.  Our hearts and minds die like an easel. Yet, being nightly, they long for daylight.  We make flaws, yet we want to be right.  Despite my best efforts, I feel very insipid.  Yet, having a proud spirit, this man is frigid.  My spirit is hit by the loss of innocence.  I'm still here, sipping my coffee fragrance.  We must fight the urge to feel remorseful.  Since my origins, I have been resourceful.  What remains inside is only pain and humor.  The unique items left are tears and banter.  The unmistakable variable in the universe  Never has my dilemma felt so full of promise. Your lack of light scares you behind. My bad spirit brightens my mind.  within the shrine's mystical confines.  I dwell on the ossuaries of my brain's design.
Written: August 20, 2022

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Date: 8/25/2022 6:09:00 AM
A wonderful write Sotto, we all have our conflicts as we journey through life, sometimes we’re good and sometimes not nice. We all make mistakes it’s true, at the end of the day we’re only human and must do the best we can do… Belle
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:49:00 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. The loss of innocence continues forever in a person's life and their life will never be what it should have been because of it. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and your visit. Sara
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Date: 8/21/2022 6:28:00 AM
Intriguing thoughts to ponder, Lasaad. A dialogue of complex emotions.
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Date: 8/21/2022 1:50:00 AM
You take me into another dimension with this excellent poetry, Lasaad, Whether its the state of the world, or just plain old mankind. The poetry sure does reach out...Love it, thanks for the ride..Harry
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Date: 8/20/2022 10:39:00 PM
Many reasons why we behave as you described. Sometimes, like me, it is the result of medication. Great poem.
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Date: 8/20/2022 2:34:00 PM
Coming of age, loss of innocence, world weariness, what a great poem Lasaad, you express mankind’s inner conflict, in your own inimitable abstract style, your intellect is profound, perhaps both uplifted and resigned to our human condition, cheers David
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