Loss

Searing pain rips through my chest,
As I slip on the painted green stairs, 
Running from something I’m not sure
Too afraid to stop, to turn my head.

My heart races, my head throbbing,
If I could just take a deep breath,
To cleanse my soul and refresh,
Where is this dark building I’m in.

Lying in warmth I move my hand,
Red covers me, flowing down the steps,
A peaceful calm envelopes as I view
My Dad with open arms waiting for me.

He is standing now, out of his wheelchair,
Smiling with his crooked grin so sweet,
The pain ebbs and happiness grows
Then I wake again to the dark emptiness.



Written September 23, 2012
For Francine Robert’s contest
“In Dreams”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Lee. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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October 3, 2012 at 3:02 PM
the loss of a loved one is always very heartbraking, that's a very emotional expressed poem, thanks for sharing it.god bless you. Hugs!Erich
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 1:59 PM
wow, a very powerful one. and the sad surprise ending makes it a perfect entry for that challenging contest.
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September 23, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Sad write but so very well written. Hugs Michael
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Well written, but sad Lee. Good luck in the contest, hope you win. Have a wonderful Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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