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Losing You

long looks upon the face of fate while fate frowns down upon the looks of me you say to fight the tide but the current drags me out to sea oh your sadness oh how the irony you anger at me but your anger is your own tyranny forgive and forget that's what they seem to tell me but our past stains our future and forgiveness isn't free i love you i love you oh how cliche but that of even more is that i died that day we're a grain of sand just one in a million out there so where's the other million when i need them, they disappear we're two flowers in a garden of many a garden of wants and needs but you burned down that garden and soiled its seeds "You did this to me." what your slicing words portray but all of your whispering it whisps me further away why can't you remember the sand, garden or sea we used to have good times but pain distorts your memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 11/10/2011 10:35:00 PM
i like it. comment on mine
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