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Losing It

They are cracking up in China They are cracking up in Israel They are cracking up in Africa Not pleasant to crack up I had a female lover who cracked up Miss her But I want to stay alive So I let it slide I will continue to read Good loving is what I need

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/10/2019 5:02:00 PM
Just here to say hello and thanks for reading my latest poem.
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Date: 3/30/2019 8:21:00 PM
hmmm, for me, cracking up means laughing really hard. But also I guess it can mean they are going crazy? Anyway, I really liked how easy this one read. Short and sweet and a cute ending to boot.
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