L'Nass Shango Poet Free verse

Lord, Thank You

Lord, thank you for Christmas
And forgotten friends who call
To remind us
We were once useful, after all.
Lord, thank you for friendships, and
Memories of good deeds done
That binds us
On the fragile edge of the sun.
Lord, thank you for our memory's
Landscape of love
And flowers we name at sight
And their fragrance in our hearts
Lord, thank you for Christmas
Whatever day you came
To interchange your joy and place
With my unworthy race.

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Abraham L December 31, 2009 at 5:33 AM very nice, i especially like the end part that says whatever day you came. people tends to be too caught up and and do not have ythe answer with what day he came, instead of concentating on the fact that he came. love it very nice

Sara Kendrick December 28, 2009 at 12:47 PM Beautiful write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick December 28, 2009 at 8:15 AM A beautiful prayer, L'nass. Thank you for sharing this with us. Peace and love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 27, 2009 at 8:42 AM Wonderful and meaningful poetry put so well L'nass.. enjoy your lines immensely... we have much to be thankful for in life especially Christmastime... happy Sunday with blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Laura Mckenzie December 26, 2009 at 5:34 PM L"nass~I get a Very special feel when I read this beautiful reflection of gratefulness & God! I Love It! Laura :)

Richard Pickett December 26, 2009 at 10:20 AM Very inspirational write here L'Nass, A very nice peaceful read for a Saturday Morning...Thank you...God Bless...Taz

Robert A. Dufresne December 26, 2009 at 7:52 AM Amen and Amen.

Charmaine Chircop December 26, 2009 at 6:41 AM Lord thankyou for this wonderful friend here,this friend with a golden heart you've blessed me with..Yep im talking about you my friend,,Hope you had a blessed xmas..:)Charma