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Lord of the Sabbath

Sabbath day hands rub against plucked grain heads watchful foe -Inspired by Luke 6:1-11- 12-21-13

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/4/2015 3:41:00 AM

Yes It is special Laura. Love> Rajat

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2014 1:37:00 PM

Remember the Sabbath Day to keep it holy. Few words, but they collectively convey a lot of wisdom.

Nocturnal Poet

Date: 12/25/2013 5:52:00 AM

THANK YOU FOR GOING THROUGH MY POEM AND LEAVING UP SUCH A NICE COMMENT AND MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 3:42:00 AM

- Happy Christmas, Laura. - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 12:10:00 AM

Laura, , The end of the year is approaching :) :) :) And guess what? There's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer"

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/23/2013 7:51:00 PM

Laura beautiful write.

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 12/23/2013 7:24:00 PM

And so we watch and guard.~ Kilmer

Joseph May

Date: 12/23/2013 7:20:00 AM

An enlightening haiku Laura...best wishes