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Lord--I Have a Request

"LORD ~ I Have A Request"


              ~ LORD ~ 
I needn't tell YOU
  what's happening these days.
This beautiful world YOU created 
   is hurting in so many ways!

The ugliness of violence and hate,
    more and more is raising it's head.
Instead of moving towards Peace and Love
    more darkness is being spread!

What will it take to have people know
     that Love can conquer all?
Are YOU actually considering another flood
     of forty days and nights of rainfall???

Before YOU do 
      I beseech this of YOU,
please give your children another chance,
      to change our ways  
towards peace-filled days,
      and end this hate-filled advance!

I know I shouldn't put it this way
       but LORD  
I hate all the hate!!!
       In trying to maintain a heart of Love,
I refuse to let the hate dominate!!!

Love can actually change this world
       and do it one heart at a time!
               ~ LORD ~ 
Please enter and touch EVERY heart,
        that's the request of this rhyme!!!



        WTA-IV  7/12/2016

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Daisy Reilly Date: 11/5/2022 2:10:00 AM There is a big book that has been written about an Angel of Christ ..She threw herself into the abyss of hate to bring her children home ... The future is a bleak one for many of planet earth ..Christ is going home and taking me with him On a wish I hope to see you there I'm doing okay I've got a handful of friends to carry me Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 2/9/2022 10:33:00 PM Thanks for sharing this prayer. God bless you. Login to Reply

Ann Foster Date: 9/12/2019 10:38:00 AM "hate dominate"...strong words ... so sadly true... Wonderful write. Ann Login to Reply

Quoth Theraven Date: 11/19/2018 10:07:00 PM I like this poem. We need more poets like you in the world. -Richard Login to Reply

James Tate Date: 10/3/2016 5:27:00 PM Walter I found this interesting poem where you have a request to the Lord. Nice job. With all the hate it's good to see your statement about love changing the world. We are close to other momentus events with far-reaching consequences. I explore some of this in my book "I go to Prepare a Place." Keep up the good writing, Walter. Login to Reply

Holly Bohto Date: 8/15/2016 1:07:00 PM The rainbow is the contract between God and man that he will not flood again. But he has other elements at his disposal. At some point God is going to shut the door on mercy and forgiveness and all those who had time to repent are going to realize there time wasn't well spent. Then they will be dead with no recollection or written in the book of life's ressurection. You can't save those who won't save themselves. Nice write WTA. Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/6/2016 3:58:00 PM I love this Walter. It brought tears to my eyes. Just thought I'd check in because I haven't heard from you lately. All ok? Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/3/2016 8:41:00 PM Very touching request, and that's why he hasn't brought the end yet, he wants all to understand and change their ways, but stubborn humans will be disappointed when that day comes. 2Peter3:9 Excellent write! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/20/2016 12:46:00 AM This is a heart-warming prayer, Walter:) Login to Reply Walter T. Ashe Date: 7/20/2016 1:35:00 PM Hi Jo! The power of prayer is amazing!...and it must never stop!!! Thank you Jo and God Bless you! :-)

Sandra Haight Date: 7/14/2016 10:21:00 PM Such a wonderful prayer to God, Walter, begging for His help to "enter and touch every heart" so love can change the world. Beautifully written, and a 7 and Fav for me. Sandra Login to Reply Walter T. Ashe Date: 7/20/2016 1:32:00 PM Hi Sandra! HE hears our prayers and this one I know HE heard! :-) Thank you and God Bless you!

Winged Warrior Date: 7/12/2016 9:21:00 PM A warrior of light must fight all kinds of battles...this is one of many...I bow brother Walter... excellent verse...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Walter T. Ashe Date: 7/14/2016 8:22:00 PM ^WW^...The best to you Sir! The Light will always overcome the darkness....it always has and it ALWAYS WILL! God blesses you Sir!

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 7/12/2016 7:12:00 PM Very nice heartfelt poem prayer Walter…we do live in crazy times my friend and love and prayer are always a good alternative to hate…you are so right! Love it!:) Login to Reply Walter T. Ashe Date: 7/12/2016 7:46:00 PM Hi Cheryl! The world is and will always be a beautiful place, Unfortunately there are some that refuse to see that! Your words are very warmly received! Thank you! :-)