Lord--I Have a Request

"LORD ~ I Have A Request"


              ~ LORD ~ 
I needn't tell YOU
  what's happening these days.
This beautiful world YOU created 
   is hurting in so many ways!

The ugliness of violence and hate,
    more and more is raising it's head.
Instead of moving towards Peace and Love
    more darkness is being spread!

What will it take to have people know
     that Love can conquer all?
Are YOU actually considering another flood
     of forty days and nights of rainfall???

Before YOU do 
      I beseech this of YOU,
please give your children another chance,
      to change our ways  
towards peace-filled days,
      and end this hate-filled advance!

I know I shouldn't put it this way
       but LORD  
I hate all the hate!!!
       In trying to maintain a heart of Love,
I refuse to let the hate dominate!!!

Love can actually change this world
       and do it one heart at a time!
               ~ LORD ~ 
Please enter and touch EVERY heart,
        that's the request of this rhyme!!!



        WTA-IV  7/12/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/5/2022 2:10:00 AM
There is a big book that has been written about an Angel of Christ ..She threw herself into the abyss of hate to bring her children home ... The future is a bleak one for many of planet earth ..Christ is going home and taking me with him On a wish I hope to see you there I'm doing okay I've got a handful of friends to carry me
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Date: 2/9/2022 10:33:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this prayer. God bless you.
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Date: 9/12/2019 10:38:00 AM
"hate dominate"...strong words ... so sadly true... Wonderful write. Ann
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:07:00 PM
I like this poem. We need more poets like you in the world. -Richard
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Date: 10/3/2016 5:27:00 PM
Walter I found this interesting poem where you have a request to the Lord. Nice job. With all the hate it's good to see your statement about love changing the world. We are close to other momentus events with far-reaching consequences. I explore some of this in my book "I go to Prepare a Place." Keep up the good writing, Walter.
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:07:00 PM
The rainbow is the contract between God and man that he will not flood again. But he has other elements at his disposal. At some point God is going to shut the door on mercy and forgiveness and all those who had time to repent are going to realize there time wasn't well spent. Then they will be dead with no recollection or written in the book of life's ressurection. You can't save those who won't save themselves. Nice write WTA.
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Date: 8/6/2016 3:58:00 PM
I love this Walter. It brought tears to my eyes. Just thought I'd check in because I haven't heard from you lately. All ok?
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Date: 8/3/2016 8:41:00 PM
Very touching request, and that's why he hasn't brought the end yet, he wants all to understand and change their ways, but stubborn humans will be disappointed when that day comes. 2Peter3:9 Excellent write!
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:46:00 AM
This is a heart-warming prayer, Walter:)
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 7/20/2016 1:35:00 PM
Hi Jo! The power of prayer is amazing!...and it must never stop!!! Thank you Jo and God Bless you! :-)
Date: 7/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
Such a wonderful prayer to God, Walter, begging for His help to "enter and touch every heart" so love can change the world. Beautifully written, and a 7 and Fav for me. Sandra
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 7/20/2016 1:32:00 PM
Hi Sandra! HE hears our prayers and this one I know HE heard! :-) Thank you and God Bless you!
Date: 7/12/2016 9:21:00 PM
A warrior of light must fight all kinds of battles...this is one of many...I bow brother Walter... excellent verse...god bless...^WW^
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 7/14/2016 8:22:00 PM
^WW^...The best to you Sir! The Light will always overcome the darkness....it always has and it ALWAYS WILL! God blesses you Sir!
Date: 7/12/2016 7:12:00 PM
Very nice heartfelt poem prayer Walter…we do live in crazy times my friend and love and prayer are always a good alternative to hate…you are so right! Love it!:)
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 7/12/2016 7:46:00 PM
Hi Cheryl! The world is and will always be a beautiful place, Unfortunately there are some that refuse to see that! Your words are very warmly received! Thank you! :-)
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