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Looking Within and Seeing Out

Shadows are indeed peculiar things they look at you from many an angle looking at them seeming so false sometimes everything looks real tangle Deep inside there seems you're there but differences from one self is sure unrecognisable in many facets looking is this me? can't be someone newer It is me for my shadow looms looks so similar with my inner core only I can know real differences but as road concludes will open door In the shadow of self filled with fear one is so reluctant to go own way but in real substance confidence sure sometimes feel tossed by night and day Looking within and seeing out describes myself exactly to a tee which one has the upper edge confusing to know who's real me! (Relate this to myself having had stammer all my life , seeing my stammering self as my shadow and my normal self as the person. )

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Date: 10/13/2016 4:45:00 AM
Scotland how nice .. you have to check my brave heart poem then you might like it its about the movie as well thank you
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/13/2016 7:31:00 AM
Yes well i 'm armenian I live in egypt I happen to love scottish an british accent i find my passion in it.. Thats all an thanx for reading i appreciate it
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/13/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Talin, actually never seen Braveheart which is a shame for a Scot but will check out your poem , where are you in our world anyway?, have blessed day, Gordon
Date: 10/12/2016 2:01:00 PM
i loved the way you explained it .. very well written ,, thank you
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/12/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thanks Talin, so glad you loved it and thanks for kind comment, have great day, best wishes from Scotland, Gordon

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