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Looking Over the Hills

LOOKING OVER THE HILLS I SAW LIFE BUT IT WASNT NATURAL SOMEHOW I SAW LIFE HOW IT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE AND NOT REALIZING I WAS IN REAL LIFE I FOUND MYSELF AND I WAS GLAD CAPABLE TO FLY AND REACH MY HIGHEST DREAMS I SAW A NICE LIFE WITHOUT STRESS AND THAT ONLY I COULD LIVE IT BUT I HAD TO LIVE IT BEST I ONLY SAW FLOWERS BECAUSE OF THE TRESS THAT WERE BLOCKING MY VIEW AND I FINALLY LOOKED BEYOND THE TRESS AND SAW A GREAT LIFE FOR ME AND YOU.

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Date: 4/24/2009 9:19:00 AM
Beautiful indeed. pls. check spelling. I do like your poem.
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:13:00 PM
Nice work Miesha, welcome to poetry soup.
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:39:00 PM
Aggh! The CAPP.S! Fix it please
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