Looking Over the Hills

LOOKING OVER THE HILLS I SAW LIFE
BUT IT WASNT NATURAL 
SOMEHOW I SAW LIFE HOW IT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE
AND NOT REALIZING I WAS IN REAL LIFE I FOUND MYSELF
AND I WAS GLAD CAPABLE TO FLY AND REACH
MY HIGHEST DREAMS I SAW A NICE LIFE WITHOUT STRESS AND
THAT ONLY I COULD LIVE IT BUT I HAD TO LIVE IT BEST
I ONLY SAW FLOWERS BECAUSE OF THE TRESS THAT WERE
BLOCKING MY VIEW AND I FINALLY LOOKED BEYOND THE TRESS
AND SAW A GREAT LIFE FOR ME AND YOU.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful indeed. pls. check spelling. I do like your poem.
Moreno Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Nice work Miesha, welcome to poetry soup.
Anymore Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Aggh! The CAPP.S! Fix it please
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