Looking Glass-Senryu



         

         brings back memories,
         haze of cotton candy days,
         with limitless play

       
                 7/21/2022
                   ~2~


Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/4/2022 1:15:00 AM
Sweet. Well penned. Blessings
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/4/2022 10:52:00 AM
Hello Paghunda…thank you for the compliment may the sun brighten your already glowing soul. Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/23/2022 7:39:00 AM
Hi my friend Pangie. You've certainly captured the haze of cotton candy days! I didn't care for it much. :| Linda
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/4/2022 10:58:00 AM
Linda, I was thinking of West Virginia today and the great time I had there when I was 12! In high school, we took a train to DC. Kids from all over America were there. I met a boy from the South,and loved his accent and manners. I forgot his name but remember his looks and kindness to me. Impressed this Chicago gal!))) Panagiota XXX
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2022 10:18:00 AM
I too, preferred the ice. ;) Crazy, coming from the south, huh?! Linda
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 9:45:00 AM
Hi, my friend. Wishing you a stupendous day! It’s fine you did not like it. I was thinking of other things associated with it. Like summer, family, fun, fairs and friends. I did not like roller skating but loved ice skating.)) I cherish your comment! Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/22/2022 4:33:00 PM
Happy times are here again! Thanks for the uplifting poem my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 10:07:00 AM
Hello Bill! I hope that it’s not too hot in Texas. I heard it was really warm and Arizona too! I really appreciate your comment that the poem was uplifting! Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/22/2022 11:39:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes those were the days we had enjoyable play time and cotton candy. Hugs Darlene xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2022 10:47:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes I was a fun friend to those that j=knew me. No I have tried to ice skate. I could not stand up when I had ice skates on. Love cotton candy. I did enjoy it. I do not know if cotton candy is world wide. I did enjoy it. Hugs Darlenexxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 10:05:00 AM
Hello Darlene, I bet you were a fun friend to those who knew you. And I wonder if you ice skated like I did? I wonder if cotton candy is a worldwide threaY? I liked Merry go rounds and Ferris wheels. did you? Thank you. Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/22/2022 11:24:00 AM
'Limitless play?' Seems that way now. But we had to come in at twilight. Way too early. Much better to stay outside through darkness... And yet, 'those were the days!'
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 10:00:00 AM
Hi Gershon.. my mother read me poetry in the mornings. I Had a dog to play with in the house. I had a rolltop desk when I was seven years old and a typewriter. Grandfather lived in the apartment next to us. and he had a piano that played rolls. We listened to FDR, fireside chats. I had a humungus yard with slides swings and a WWll tent. We played late into the night as my Dad had a business.at least nobody was getting killed like today! Nor were children kidnapped. So I was out late! It was the best childhood. Add to that, my parents both had senses of humor, like you do. I hope we all appreciate each day now…including pain.)) Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/22/2022 11:21:00 AM
What a fun poem to enjoy!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2022 9:47:00 AM
Dear Elena, I think when you were a little girl that you had most fun. Thank you Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/21/2022 11:19:00 AM
Brings back such lovely memories. Your words in this wonderful Senryu bring forth a smile. Has to be a fave. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2022 11:30:00 AM
Dear Mike, I, too smile! So nice of you to fave such a simple Senryu! With sincere appreciation, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/21/2022 10:44:00 AM
I remember when the fair would come to town and I adored the pink cotton candy we all shared. A lovely senryu that made me so nostalgic this morning. Blessings xxoo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2022 11:18:00 AM
Nice to remember those days, right! I can still smell the cotton candy. Golly, it was like magic food, Connie! ))) Yummy for the tummy. Panagiota xx
Date: 7/21/2022 10:34:00 AM
Love it, Pangie. Oh the memories.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2022 11:14:00 AM
You would have been a FUN playmate! Can you imagine? LOL! Panagiota xxx
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