Looking For Clues

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LOOKING FOR CLUES The grass is all green, there is no snow to be seenOnly a melting snowman was the clue to the scene Indiana Shaw . . . "Just placing my bets here as to when the snowman's head will drop off" . . . ; )

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/3/2021 10:43:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, the head of the snowman will fall off first. This will makes the grass greener. blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2021 11:04:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, Ah! Mother nature melted the snowman to water. Ha ha. I am staying warm. It snowed last night and the snow stayed. enjoy your day my friend.

Indiana Shaw
Date: 2/5/2021 4:44:00 AM

Next morning, Darlene, the snowman was just a mere blob, ha, ha, ha, stay warm : )

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/3/2021 9:16:00 AM

The last of the ice heads...but the grass enjoyed it...Nice imagery...

Indiana Shaw
Date: 2/3/2021 9:58:00 AM

Double vision, the last of the grass, but; the ice head enjoyed it . . . ; )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/3/2021 8:21:00 AM

The melting snowman needs to be refrigerated and kept as evidence lol. Still none down here, we always seem to miss out. Tom

Indiana Shaw
Date: 2/3/2021 8:40:00 AM

Ello, Tom, not sure if I have freezer big enough to keep the snowman, I will just have to hope that the photographic evidence is enough, he he he . . . ; )