Looking For a Better Day

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Yarns are swerving right now, as sadly as a fall coat of leaves It's crimson for a split second, sending cures from the last zest. the shade then fades to yellow, I wish I could be so buoyant and upbeat. as if it haunts an anachronism, the glow dims to an amber hue. thusly, like the acrid tangy taste. my heart kindles a jauntier tomorrow. 1st PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 25, 2022 A Brian Strand 1096 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2022 5:27:00 AM

"my heart kindles a jauntier tomorrow" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/26/2022 3:50:00 PM

Your word choices illuminate the message of your poetry. Your words are as comforting as the hues in the accompanying photo. A grain of hope seeps through. Have a great weekend, Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/26/2022 3:24:00 AM

Good Morning - This entry truly is poetic and has poetic expression and elements attached. The imagery and voice describe poetry. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a wonderful weekend and enjoy poetrysoup as well.