Look Up

The sky is forever Clouds form billowing pictures The spring winds at play

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James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 2:57:00 AM

The winds do indeed carve and paint lovely pictures of clouds for us to view, nice write>James

Date: 5/14/2009 4:34:00 PM

Enjoyed this scene you paint here with words. What an uplifting view. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2009 7:11:00 PM

You have mail

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/12/2009 6:30:00 PM

Barbara Ah very spring of you! Wonderfully done! Laura :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/12/2009 4:33:00 PM

so so true. john h loving iii

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/12/2009 5:02:00 AM

Wow you make me want to go outside right now. Gorgeous nature poems today. Too beautiful and inviting. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/11/2009 11:58:00 PM

They do indeed Bg.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/11/2009 9:57:00 PM

Excellent last line, beautiful work BG...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/11/2009 8:08:00 PM

Very nice haiku, Barbara! This reminds me of the way clouds pass overhead when we're fishing offshore. Living in the woods, we only see skies that are "forever" when near the beach. Love the Red-Tailed Hawk poem, too. You're having fun with Mother Nature today! (Hope your new job is going well.) Love, Carolyn