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Look At Us Now ( Not True Just Righting As If This Were To Happen)

"mom" "Hunny im right here" "im dieing mom i listened to you i didnt drink" "i know hunny" "mom then why am im sitting in a pool of my blood" "cause the other driver did drink" "i... i love you" "i love you to sweetie" "tell... daddy i love him and sissy" if only i could have told her i was sorry if only everything at that moment was made right my last moments wouldnt have been so painful but now i have to fight through this pain through this night im laying in someone else's mess not i know how my mom feels i cant see it in the new light these are my last words so here i go sissy your beautiful not matter what he says daddy you did your best and i am grateful for everyday you yelled at me to make me a better person, mommy my hero my idol you never let us down even when you though you did i love my family tiffy my sweetheart friend you were the best friend one could ask for never getting mad at me and always makin someone happy I LOVE YOU ALL now i have to go the doctors say i love you never for get that then she died right there with her blood under neath her her mom standing over her body and those were here last words =[

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Date: 3/10/2016 12:09:00 AM
awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2015 2:03:00 AM
Kiana:) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:54:00 PM
Wow...very emotional...very heartfelt!! A small typo at "...when you though you..." forgot the "t" at "though". Welcome to the soup...i hope you grow as a poet while you're here. Keep doing what you're doing. :-)
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