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Look At These Rocks

There was an eeriness surrounding the silence of the moon There were no bird sounds, but lots of craters formed like a lagoon. I was in disbelief, for it was nothing like I thought it would be. I thought there would be a man in the moon smiling at me. No man in the moon, only hard rocks, and no good soil at all. I shivered in the cold air – a bitter temperature in the fall. Whose idea was this? I wondered, looking around for my Dad. He was actually wearing the largest smile he had ever had. Okay, I thought. I can stand this now, for his sake. He was as giddy as a school girl as he picked up a rake. Look at these rocks! He said. So wonderful and fine! Out of all the Dads, I have to admit I am glad that he is mine.

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Date: 3/14/2022 7:23:00 PM
Lovely poem, your Dad will have a big smile on his face.
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Date: 3/14/2022 10:05:00 AM
Aw, what a sweet tribute to your dad. I wish I could say the same about mine. Dads are so important to their children's mental well-being, and many of them don't realize that.
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Date: 3/14/2022 9:01:00 AM
Nice poem and a great tribute to father.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/14/2022 10:01:00 AM
Thank you kindly

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