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Look At Me

~Look At Me~
Look at me,I will wait until you can overcome your shyness,
I will wait until you become positive.
Look at me,I will wait until you overcome your touchiness,
I will wait until you become fearless.
Look at me,I will wait until you overcome your stiffness,
I will wait until you become loving.
Look at me,I will wait until you overcome your emptiness,
I will wait until you become blameless.
Look at me,I will wait until you overcome your nervousness,
I will wait until you become indispensable for me.
                               ~I Will Not Wait~
Look at me,I will not wait because I felt you have a captivating 
charm hidden under what you show as your authority.
I will not wait,because I am eager to become part of your life, 
you gave me the impression that you have a gift of making me 
feel imperishable.
I will not wait,because you are generous with your time and friendship,
you are generous with your love so it becomes durable and loyal.
I will not wait,because you gave me the impression that your enormous 
sensitivity becomes your enormous strength to achieve your goals,and 
help your partner during a lifetime.
I will not wait,because you gave me the impression that you bring
strength and intensity to your surroundings,you encourage your spirit
& soul to remain persistent and ambitious.
I will not wait,because you gave me the impression you are so powerful 
and tenacious,nothing will stand in your way until you reach your
goals, as you do not like to be a failure.
I will not wait,because you gave me the impression that you can love me,
I will wait no more to manifest my love towards you beyond belief,
its unavoidable,its powerful,it needs no introduction anymore as my love
is instantaneous,endless,may I become your lover tonight. WOW,Yes. 

Therese Bacha
9/4/2013

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Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:37:00 PM

Therese, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

Therese Bacha
Date: 6/1/2013 2:53:00 PM

Hello again, nice to see you, thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry xoxo

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 12:33:00 PM

I congratulate you on the win here theresa; Well done..'

Therese Bacha
Date: 6/1/2013 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Joe, nice of you to pass by. Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 10:06:00 AM

Terry, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

Therese Bacha
Date: 6/1/2013 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so much PD for appreciating my poem. Always a faithful friend . Love Terry

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 5/9/2013 9:44:00 AM

Therese, in all your ...wait and ...not wait i have come to this height that you are a poetry guru. Kudos and congrats on your well deserved win.

Therese Bacha
Date: 5/9/2013 10:29:00 AM

Whoa, you made my day, thank you so much for visiting me, i am encouraged. Love Terry xoxo

Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 4/16/2013 10:12:00 AM

Hi Terry, congratulations on your awesome win. I Love this poem so deep and beautiful. bless you and big hugs.

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/16/2013 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Bernard, glad to see you back. Hope to read more of your poems. Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 9:38:00 PM

wow Terry, I love the poem, Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/15/2013 10:05:00 PM

WOW my darling PD, always so warm and tender, i love it when you pass by. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/15/2013 2:54:00 PM

congrats on your winning fave poem, great juxtaposition, great romance :)

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/15/2013 6:51:00 PM

Hi Charlotte, thank you for passing by, i am glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxo

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/15/2013 1:32:00 AM

Another gem from your pen! It's hard to make repetition actually work to make your piece stronger, but you had the right idea. Loved the contrast between the first half and second half... you will wait because your patient and at the same time you won't because there's only so much time left... lovely writing!

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/15/2013 7:29:00 AM

Hi Timothy, Thanks again its so nice of you to take time to read my poems, I really do appreciate. Love Terry xoxo

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/14/2013 9:25:00 PM

congrats Theresa for your win with this incredible entry in Andrea's contest

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 9:41:00 PM

Thank you Francine, i loved what you wrote to. Hope you are feeling good. Love Terry xoxo

Hidden Sister

Date: 4/14/2013 6:48:00 PM

Awesome a fave for me! J

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 7:01:00 PM

Oh thank you so much Jennifer, so kind of you, will pass by you. Love Terry xoxo

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2013 6:19:00 PM

And she was wowed by this. Sounds like the plot of a book I just finished. Congratulations Theresa. Love, Joyce

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 6:37:00 PM

Thank you, so nice of you Terry xoxo

Len Gasun

Date: 4/14/2013 1:02:00 PM

I also say "wow" on this great write of yours. So lovely and I enjoyed! I love it my dear friend Therese! My big warm congratulations on your grand win! Thanks a lot for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 1:12:00 PM

Oh Leonora, so ice of you to pass by, thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/14/2013 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations Therese xx

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 12:16:00 PM

Hi Mandy Thank you so much, its so nice of you to pass by. Terry xoxo

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/10/2013 5:43:00 AM

I think andrea s going toWow herself.How are you sweet lady?I ve sent you an e mail

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/10/2013 8:55:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, thank you so much, i wanted to try and change. Love Terry xoxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2013 4:06:00 AM

- A straight from the heart poems Terry ..... I must say: WOOOOW with BIG letters!! - Good luck in the contest my friend. - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/10/2013 4:26:00 AM

Hi Anne, Thank yo so much for the WOW, i am so happy you liked it. Trying add some variation. Love Terry xoxo Its so nice of you to always pass by me.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/9/2013 12:23:00 PM

Now Terry; What can I say about this poem? I say WOW! You have yourself a winner girl. No more waiting. Thanks for sharing..... Lucy

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/9/2013 6:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Lucy, i am trying to change my style. Love Terry xoxoxoxo thanks for the WOW.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/9/2013 6:09:00 AM

This is too fascinating for words my friend! I am very impressed with this tremendous write Therese! Each line was better than the previous line! What an undeniably fabulous poem! Great Work!!

Therese Bacha
Date: 4/9/2013 10:06:00 AM

Oh Russell my friend, thank you for those beautiful comments, as usual you transmit your strength straight to my mind. It helps me a lot. Love Terry xoxo