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"Look into these eyes and tell me what it is you create, Get a vision and start your debate, It is you that decides to have something against those eyes, The eyes you looked into without any replies, But for some strange reason you give this kid evil, you give this kid hate, In the eyes of this kid you selfishly decided to create, You could've gave him love before you gave him hate, But now its too late and he's not looking back, You're not in his vision he now has intact."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 5/13/2016 10:33:00 PM
DANIEL, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:06:00 AM
Daniel DiCiacco, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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