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Lonliness

Loneliness Lonely so lonely, so empty, I cry What is this feeling that’s draining me dry? Weary so weary, no zest anymore, Sleep does not conquer and rest won’t restore. Is it depression? I can’t tell for sure No pills or potions affecting a cure. Praying for lightness, a lifting of doom, A small spark of brightness piercing the gloom Your leaving, an ache, my heart has to thole Your lack of loving, beyond my control But here in my life a painful regret Our time together I’ll never forget

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 4:28:00 AM
This sad, but heartfelt poem, addresses an all too often reality of life in these "modern" days of mankind. Love and forgiveness, hand in hand, can take away some of the pain caused by "lost" love as the flicker of memories warms within. Thank you, Margaret, for your recent comments on my work. I have definitely missed the soup for the past week. But I am back home, now! Thank you in advance, for understanding my delay in thanking you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:54:00 PM
YOu express the loneliness very well. I love your abiltiy to use rhythm and rhyme in such a pleasing way, Margaret. Hope you are not feel too lonely these days? Luv,Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:57:00 AM
Lonliness can drain you of every bit of energy and enthusiasm. Good luck and thanks for the congrats on "Dear Lord."
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:12:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your tearful poem today Margaret. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:07:00 AM
Dear Margaret, So sorry that you're experiencing these feelings. I sincerely hope you feel better soon. Nevertheless, a great write. Feel better soon, ok? Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:52:00 PM
a melancholy write, Margaret. All part of it huh? Expressed as well as can be in a poem. Sometimes complex. _Robert
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:52:00 PM
now find the truth and it shall set you free. Go deeper into who you are. Why did he not love you? Did your parents love each other? Truly the way you intend to love another? etc...
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:51:00 PM
now find the truth and it shall set you free. Go deeper into who you are. Why did he not love you? Did your parents love each other? Truly the way you intend to love another? etc...
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