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Longing To Be Free

I suppose I have been thoroughly gentrified No lover of the old country bluegrass, I Was country-bred and to poverty born, And suppose back home in the hills I shall die 'Midst the high mountain's air now rarified, I shall go back when aged like many others To stroll the worn, beaten paths I remember While I can before the urban life smothers, And I am become another victim terrified By angry waves of petrifying lawlessness And sore deprivation in great time of need In mind I have grown increasingly restless, Mindful how the world around me might be Finding myself, desperately longing to be free. written September 12, 2021

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Date: 9/14/2021 1:00:00 AM
I can relate to this...
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Date: 9/13/2021 2:06:00 AM
I think when we return to a place remembered from our youth the memories and realities collide, never quite lives up to expectations. mind you bluegrass and mountains might be an exception to the rule...Delice
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Date: 9/12/2021 12:38:00 PM
I want to be free of this too "before the urban life smothers, And I am become another victim terrified By angry waves of petrifying lawlessness"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 5:55:00 PM
Do you think that subconsciously we all have a desire to return to the places of our childhood before we die? I wonder.

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