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Longing Murky, Dreary Missing, Dreaming, Hoping I pine for you, Love Love Dear, True Calling, Waiting, Crying Where are you, Sweetheart?
De. 18,2014 7.20pm - a try of cinquain poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2017 3:44:00 AM
Have been searching for poems like this one throughout ur collection to see if i could see one and am glad i did.Its been a long while sweet friend and i really miss you and all the soupers,this kidney sickness has eaten me but i pray i sort myself out somehow
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:35:00 AM
Great lines with blessed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..
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Len Gasun
Date: 2/4/2015 8:01:00 AM
biggest hugs!
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:00:00 AM
You are much welcome my dear friend, Funom. I'm more thankful to you for your precious time and inspiring comments. So far, New Year is goin well with God's mercy despite the persistent tight schedules. TYTYSM and many blessing to you from Him.
Date: 1/10/2015 5:58:00 PM
hmmm, I think I misinterpreted. IF I go by the picture, it's this little baby. hahaha.
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:46:00 PM
;))))))))))))))) Big hugs!
Date: 1/10/2015 5:57:00 PM
I like how you ended the second one with the person asking "where are you, sweetheart." this one is bittersweet. Leonora, soupmail!!
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:45:00 PM
Thank you so much my very dear friend, Andrea. Big hugs!
Date: 12/26/2014 8:44:00 PM
awe sweet sis, you have my heart at grip. Leo, I'm happy to be back 3 days in a row... It was nice hearing from you on my poem... sending you hugs, Hope your Christmas was a blessed one. always and forever your BFF ~Linda
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 1:29:00 AM
Oh, forever dearest poet sis and best friend of mine! You don't know how happy and grateful I am to see you around. Sorry if I just dropped by now 'coz I took MY bed rest in few days hoping to completely recuperate. TYTYSSM too my dearest sis and forever BFF of mine. I hope your Christmas was a blessed one too. You're always in my best wishes and prayers. Many warm hugs!
Date: 12/20/2014 11:00:00 AM
- Hey, my dear friend Leonora - a lovely poem! - .... a Christmas smile to you - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise for the wonderful comment and Christmas smile. I need it especially now. I'm still recovering from flu which hit me since last week. The reason why I'm late with my expression of gratitude. I wish you and your loved ones a peaceful and lovely Christmas, too. Hugs!
Date: 12/19/2014 5:46:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..The baby picture is so sweet but sad..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2014 6:21:00 AM
You're welcome my dear friend Sara. Thank you so much for your very inspiring comments too. Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/19/2014 3:49:00 PM
Ohh this is so lovely Leonora! yet...pining for love....feeling the longing for something that might seem elusive. The baby's face says it all! #7 I see that this is for Dr Ram's contest; may I wish you good luck:) Hugs /x/ paul
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for your very wonderful comments and wishes my dear friend Paul. Thanks a lot for the good luck wish too. Merry merry Christmas! Sorry for being late. Hugs!
Date: 12/19/2014 3:31:00 PM
ohh, this is so sweet, lorry.. how are you?.. I am longing for you this Christmas!.. a fine cinquain; huggs to you, dear friend...
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:17:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend Nette. That's so sweet, too. I'm so sorry for dropping by just now. I've been hit by flu here and as of now, I'm not fully recovered. All my friends here in condo went back home to the Phil. this morning chsing Christmas there but I decided to stay 'coz of my health situation. I'll try to enjoy Christmas alone ;)) or join friends outside when I'm ok. Merry Christmas! Hugs, hugs!
Date: 12/19/2014 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for the entry to my contest, Leo
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2014 6:12:00 AM
You are welcome my dear friend Dr. Ram. Merry Christmas! Hugs!

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