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Longing For Springtime

If I could live one day again, I'd choose that day so fair We walked among the jaded trees, in dappled shade, a blanket spread You found within the meadow grass, some flowers for my hair Sun warmed a place as fresh as spring, which made a fragrant bed Our innocence, yet unexplored, held love within its grasp Your longing eyes, and tender touch, were petals in the wind Assured we were. How could we know? No words, or questions asked We languished, blessed by smiling skies, and promises began But time moves on and days grow short, for springtime fades to gray We're not so young, the days moved on, and though our autumn's here With winter near, I feel your love, just as it was that day... It warms my heart to be assured that love can last the years Far back in time, with younger face, our future yet untold My dream awakes, I'm young inside, .....when did we both grow old?
_________________________________________________________ For Brian Strand's Contest #211
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Grasso Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie! ...Fran
Scars Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:02 PM
beautiful sonnet sweet Carrie :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Wonderful quote n a superb poem dear Carrie!A perfect beauty n the final line! Congrats on big win!
Nance Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 4:09 PM
This quote was the top used in my contest, and your take on it was amazing. Thank you so much for writing for my prompt, I enjoyed this very much!!
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Carrie, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE
Gorelick Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:18 PM
It really did late so quickly.. A beautiful piece. congrats. BG
Eastman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Absolutely... wonderfully written! Congrats on the win!... and I'm off... cuse I just can't stop reading!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Oh Carrie this is so beautiful many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx7
Onclaud Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:21 AM
hello carrie... where have you been?... am glad to read this chant-like work so touching and well defined!... awesome!.. huggs
Williams Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Hi Carrie nice to read your work again, I like the image as it moves on through time, good luck....David
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