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Longing Fills My Heart

family members send greetings across the miles... longing fills my heart *Entry for Brian's three-line contest

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/9/2011 3:11:00 PM

So sad, wish it were different for you.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2011 2:39:00 PM

Yes, I know how you feel, my friend. Heartfelt piece

Lamarcus Walton

Date: 12/8/2011 6:59:00 PM

Hi Carolyn. This is Lamarcus from the ID theft Unit. I was thinking of you and just wanted to say hello.

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2011 7:19:00 PM

I feel the spirit of your Holiday here dear poet, and thank you for the gift to Noah and myself....your heart rings true my dear friend ! Have a precious week Carolyn....much love, james

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2011 5:53:00 PM

I have opened your card it was my first and you an not know how I love getting cards! You are too kind! Missing you...Debbie

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2011 4:43:00 PM

I can relate to this Carolyn, thank you the sentiment is beautiful. harry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:39:00 AM

mine too. very touching write :)

Amber Chafer

Date: 12/5/2011 2:08:00 AM

Very nice! Good luck!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/4/2011 11:55:00 PM

Quite a heartfelt write Carolyn.. All the best for Brian's contest with this beauty.. Love Wilma

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/4/2011 8:27:00 PM

touching senryu Carolyn, best of luck in the contest

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/4/2011 7:31:00 PM

Carolyn, I had to read some of the Chef's Senryu and Haiku to be able to make a semi-sensable comment i actually was just writing to say you will be getting a Soup Mail. I know for assurity Chef will love this poem "family members' "send greetings across the miles..." "longing fills my heart" this poem is also Harry , HG kenny

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 5:45:00 PM

A great sentiment at this time of the year, Carolyn. :Nicely penned.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/4/2011 5:28:00 PM

ahhh...very nice.

James Peranteau

Date: 12/4/2011 5:18:00 PM

....and in three lines, you've managed to over whelm us with joyous thoughts dear poet ! Awesome my dear Carolyn ! Have a blessed week love, james

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/4/2011 5:05:00 PM

What a wonderful Senryu, and perfect for Brian's contest!! It is so true, when you get a greeting from family, far away, you just get that longing to see them, and share the holidays with them!! I love this piece! Awesome Work!!

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/4/2011 4:33:00 PM

Carolyn I stopped by to read your poetry and I did enjoyed them. Nice break for a Sunday morning. I am back to poetry again after a month long break, and I thank you for visiting my "corner". I wish you luck in your entry, I will check on you again in the future. Love Dalila

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2011 3:45:00 PM

Send greetings to them..You have love to spare..Enjoyed reading your creative Senryu...Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/4/2011 3:09:00 PM

Ahh at the least your heart is full..! Dear Carolyn.. maybe not as full as your soup pagest though..! (ha ha) if you missed my blog check out Info@georgewebb.tv thanks for coming back to me..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/4/2011 2:50:00 PM

The heart is longing for family members and I find this more so at Christmas time. Good luck in Brian's contest. love phyl