'longing Embrace'

tears trickle down my face longing embrace sniff 06/05/2011

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2011 10:53:00 AM

Just eight words -- eight! And you evoke so much emotion, Wilma. Awesome lanterne, dear. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2011 1:55:00 AM

what image " sniff" conjures , wils.. like a snuffed cry, an imprisoned bellow! amazing.. :) hugggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 1:43:00 PM

so cute at the end, that little snifferoo, Wilma. Love seeing your little poems!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/6/2011 1:28:00 PM

ahahaha I have to sleep now-- why did I sdudenly think of armpits??? O_0 lol-- nope not my armpits >.< -- yup just plain 'ol smelly onions, the real ones-- told ya I get crazy-- ok ok I better starting counting sheep (mmm curried lamb cooked with onions?!?) --oh ! oops!! ok ok I am off to sleep on a hungry tummy now, boohoo or should I say, *sniff*?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2011 1:04:00 PM

So much conveyed in so few words on the longing, Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/6/2011 12:55:00 PM

what a cute way to end this! *sniff* -- hmm why did I suddenly think of onions, missy? & aha! I just read Chris' comments below-- oh shucks... now you made him cry, tsk tsk Missy Neels-- best not to call him Uncle-- how about Grandpa?? kidding, Chris ;) seriously though, sniff, sniff, am I smelling something in the air here?? wink, wink ;)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 5/6/2011 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful Lanterne -short in words and long in feeling. You have created a magic. Congratulations! Welcome to PoetrySoup as Life Member. -Mohammad

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 10:22:00 AM

Intense write here Wilma..enjoyed---kash

James Peranteau

Date: 5/6/2011 6:11:00 AM

What a soft power packed write Wilma, so terse, I enjoyed this write dear poet ! Have yourself a wonderful weekend....much love, james