Longing and Belongings

It's not without reason that it rained that day.
Those winter clouds were paler than my dead
grandmother's face. The wet blanket, which
the morning air wrapped around my sleepless
back, bore no pearls. The ever cribbing qualm
that sings the separation of leaving me to love me
wrote those broken words in those striped stones,
Sutlej gave them to me.

"Start again, let go of the bygones -
The simple is not meant to be complicated.
If you're walking your grave through, walk alone."

The body craves as the soul does and only more.
Yet the constructs of love keep me waiting
for the impossibility of being felt the way I want.
The poet sang for the wingless bird which longs
to fly and fly away. Images from a half shut door
of the unvanquished spirit keep my dreams alive even
when the winter clouds turned paler than my dead
grandmother's face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/6/2024 10:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:49:00 PM
Arpan,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Arpan Krishna Deb
Date: 7/27/2016 1:43:00 AM
Thank you very much LINDA for the warm words. I will definitely read your poems. And I would appreciate any criticism that you wish to share about the words I put in here. You have asked me about my poetic skills but I guess I am not really aware of any such skills in me. I write stuffs and I think they are poems. I guess I am more of a reader than a writer. I do not know the grammar and technicalities to analyze poems structurally. I get to feel for words and that's how I relate to them.
Date: 7/19/2016 9:52:00 AM
Arpan,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Arpan Krishna Deb
Date: 7/19/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you very much SKAT. It is very nice of you to take time out and write those kind words. I am not quite sure I will ever qualify as a poet, yet I thought of putting up some words which I wrote in some form or formless abstraction. Thank you again for being the newest friend.
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