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Longing

Longing Longing, Craving, coveting, Aspiration, appetence, ache, Desire, dream, distant, disgust, Yearning ! Longing, Inevitable, iridescent, Memorable, mystic, magnificent, Romantic, rapturous, revealing, riveting, Wanting! Written December 24th, 2014 For Dr. Ram's contest "Cinquain" Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 1/6/2015 12:39:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved first place win, Dr. Upma! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Upma, for your win for this wonderful longing poem. Best wishes for your new year. Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:00:00 PM
Nicely won, Dr, Upma. congrats for you in this new year.
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:31:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:09:00 AM
Hi Upma! What a lovely way to start the new year! A top placing with a lovely, powerful Cinquain expressed with a clever choice of words. Congratulations! May this year keep shining for you! // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:01:00 AM
Congrats on the win Upma,this is a great work...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 9:28:00 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Dr. Upma
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:54:00 AM
Love all the alliteration...Merry Christmas Upma and a happy and healthy new year...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:00:00 AM
every word a piece to a puzzle, :)
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Date: 12/24/2014 2:57:00 PM
I love your chosen words for this form, Dr Sharma! Good luck on the contest and wishing you a blessed holiday season. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/24/2014 2:56:00 PM
Is this about me? :) What a beautifully penned piece here, Merry Christmas Dr. Upma A. Sharma. hugs
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Date: 12/24/2014 1:23:00 PM
'Appetence' - I have not seen that word in a while. Good Luck in the contest Dr Sharma.
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:50:00 AM
very well penned Dr Sharma good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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