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Longing

Longing Longing, Craving, coveting, Aspiration, appetence, ache, Desire, dream, distant, disgust, Yearning ! Longing, Inevitable, iridescent, Memorable, mystic, magnificent, Romantic, rapturous, revealing, riveting, Wanting! Written December 24th, 2014 For Dr. Ram's contest "Cinquain" Awarded 1st place win

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:39:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved first place win, Dr. Upma! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Dr. Upma, for your win for this wonderful longing poem. Best wishes for your new year. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:00:00 PM

Nicely won, Dr, Upma. congrats for you in this new year.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:31:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:09:00 AM

Hi Upma! What a lovely way to start the new year! A top placing with a lovely, powerful Cinquain expressed with a clever choice of words. Congratulations! May this year keep shining for you! // paul