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Longanimity

This tale is of a long-suffering wife. In misery she lived her married life, for she had married young and badly too. Things went all wrong after she said, “I do.” If matrimony were a fire, she supplied almost all the kindling wood. Her spouse denied affection to his loving wife. He’d rarely speak. A wall he put between them, and things looked bleak. The wife would supplicate God day and night for patience and for wisdom that she might get through to her dear husband, for he had been nice when courting her, and she’d been glad. The months turned into years, and still she prayed. She held her tongue and compliments she paid each day to him – the man who was her mate. She asked God, “How much longer must I wait?” Some thirty years had passed when gradually some differences in her spouse she’d see. Small compliments she started to receive. That he might change she started to believe! Some strange effects were happening. She’d rise to see her husband look her in the eyes and ask her what she planned to do that day. He’d leave for work, and harder she would pray. She’d prayed, but also gave much from her heart, and over time, her husband took the part and gave his love to HER. Well, some may scoff, but sometimes longanimity pays off. March 17, 2022 for Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 - Poetry Contest Title Chosen: #1: Longanimity

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Date: 3/30/2022 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful story/write. Some stay and some run. Have a blessed day........................
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Date: 3/27/2022 11:14:00 PM
A beautiful story with the great moral, "sometimes longanimity pays off" - Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2022 11:30:00 AM
Such an outstanding poem, you really excelled as expected in this writing, Andrea . Congratulations on your well deserved win. Best regards
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:33:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful, haunting poem, Andrea:-) Well-done!
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Date: 3/27/2022 9:07:00 AM
A lot of truth here Andrea, strange the way People go through life the different trials And paths we go down each so different Many challenges in different guises.'
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Date: 3/24/2022 5:41:00 PM
A travesty, to live so long without your love returning to you. Sometimes the reasons for the way our lives play out are beyond our ability to understand. Prayer and patience are all we can do sometimes. It can also happen as love is withdrawn but one feels a commitment to marriage. With physical love withheld, it can be a challenge to endure while still loving and giving all you can to the relationship. I enjoyed the wisdom in your poem, Andrea. Bill
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Date: 3/20/2022 2:52:00 PM
Ah, yes, I know some of these longsuffering wives; in reality, I believe the prayers pay off and God is always good. Thanks for your sweet visits.
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Date: 3/20/2022 4:34:00 AM
A very patient wife indeed! Praying does much for the person praying, and finally her prayers were answered. Good things always comes to those that wait. Great write my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/19/2022 9:13:00 AM
heartwarming write here, my friend
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Date: 3/18/2022 12:14:00 PM
Back in the day when only the wealthy could get a divorce, women did marry young, and either had to get along with their spouse or find an escape. Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/18/2022 8:58:00 AM
When my maternal Grandmother asked my mother why she didn't leave my father, she softly replied, "Because I love him." So, she endured his drunkenness and, probably, philandering and was with him until she died.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 3/27/2022 9:12:00 AM
God bless.' Life's realitys may Be so testing; and silence can Be a great barrier..)
Date: 3/18/2022 4:16:00 AM
Yes some may say she should have left, but her prayers were answered, GL in the contest Andrea
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Joe Maverick
Date: 3/27/2022 9:20:00 AM
The write shows the victory of Good faith 'above immediate reality Pressure' maybe some push Though clumsily I mean not Fully versed in how? but that Is beside the point.' To keep Going is a sign of faith And in Truth highlights the reality of The eternal above temporal.'

Book: Shattered Sighs