Long Winter Stretch

Behind a frozen glass window I peer,
but not for long despite the pending thunder,
to spur an inner gnawing  gumption,
I turn a chilly doorknob,
with great stealth born of winters  past,
sleet-ridden gusts, swaying tree leafs,
slippy patch awaits the reckless foot,
a shivering deep down voice whispered,
perils lurk for absent-minded strollers,
caution now encrusted in each limb,
weather warning, weather brave,
the imp within me teetering in jest,
will mine be an ice skater taunt?
As I absorb dark canvasses around  me,
wondrous hint  of moonlit snowflake,
silver white midair droop miracle,
blackbird silhouette on brittle twig,
nearby sudden dart and dash,
from orange-copper feline irises,
their intermittent shrill meow,
a stark punctuation mark,
Did I hear the rustle of a drawn curtain?
actioned by some enigmatic sleeper,
fearful of the hair-raising sound,
from passing traffic at such unearthly hours,
Was I shaken by those flickering lights?
in velvet shadow rooms engulfed by mystery,
yet this somber mood seasonal pantheon,
shall bemuse that haunted house,
that much sought after haunted shelter,
where a mind in nocturnal flight,
might somehow wander unseen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 5:41 PM
Dear Howard, I was mesmerized by your striking shivering imageries. Your animated artistry pulses upon the poetic page with vibrant life "nearby sudden dart and dash,/from orange-copper feline irises,/their intermittent shrill meow,/a stark punctuation mark" -Wow! And your last two lines are a grand finale to a superb sensory and thought provoking piece. Love the title too - perfecto! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Elliott Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Back again with Congratulations with this fine poems 2nd Place podium win in Sotto Poet's latest contest, Howard! Mazel Tov!
Elliott Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Beauteous wintry write, Howard. I could sense the chill. Your weaving of verse is so superior. Yuletide greetings to you and yours. ~
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